Weak

Weak

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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 We think that
 we are strong
 that we can
 withdraw from feelings
pushing right through us
 demanding our fullest attention.
   But we aren't..
    We crumble at its feet, 
   like 
  the
  weak soul
   we are.




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
This was something I wrote about a year ago. Just happened to find it in my long lost diary so thought would share :D

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Methinks we have feelings for the same reason we have red blood - so we're permanently aware that we have them. Little to worry about, more an acceptance that we're not super-human. Perhaps?

Could have missed this, more than glad i haven't -is sharply written, near defiant in a way. Admitting to being you.. and nothing wrong there!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Weeks Ago

Aye, we aren't. Still sometimes feels nice to have the feeling of having everything under control..... read more



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Methinks we have feelings for the same reason we have red blood - so we're permanently aware that we have them. Little to worry about, more an acceptance that we're not super-human. Perhaps?

Could have missed this, more than glad i haven't -is sharply written, near defiant in a way. Admitting to being you.. and nothing wrong there!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Weeks Ago

Aye, we aren't. Still sometimes feels nice to have the feeling of having everything under control..... read more
We are certainly weak. I know I am

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

I think I am too, especially when it comes to some things or people...
I see we both placed in the contest 😊, congrats and what a surprise it was my newest friend!!...Way to go and what I lovely piece my lady!!!!, Very powerful message

Poeticme


Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Hahah yeah thanks, congrats to you too 😊
And thank you for liking this piece 😊
We think many things, of them our own weakness never seems to make ends meet with the logic thought of whilst thinking... Nicely penned...

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

9 Months Ago

You are most welcome, and if by "nicely summed", you mean "confusingly summed"... Then yes, I would .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

Haha no I meant nicely when I said it 😉
Silente

9 Months Ago

I figured, but I to call myself out on my own confusing blather... Aha
This poem really makes you think, this is a great read, great work :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

Thank you for liking this one! I'm glad it made you think ☺
I like this poem to.
Some of us don't run from our emotions, we let them all out, and even express them though our poetry.
While others think they can avoid what they are feeling run from there emotions, eventually our emotions catch up to us, so its better to just face them.

I like this piece, short but has great meaning behind it :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

I agree! And however brave we think we are, at some point we have to realize that we aren't..
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cimmy wuv xxxooo

9 Months Ago

Sometimes you are even stronger when you face your fears and emotions, and stop running from them. <.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

I guess, yes..
Often times situations like these are the ones that help our soul growth. Honestly admitting that we are unable to push the comfort zone is the first step to realization of our strength. A crisp and strong write.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

And most of us give up hope after that first step.. Because when the fact hits that we aren't as str.. read more
Short but to the point."Withdraw from feelings" is a very good line in my honest opinion. I can certainly relate to that. The format is well done. Good job, two thumbs up!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much! And also for your honest opinion! I'm glad you liked it ☺
Interesting words of wisdom.....and also a stirring confession as well. No one likes to admit their weaknesses. It is one of our best kept secrets. However, we cannot grow as individuals unless we give in to our emotions at various points of time. And when we do we learn, grow and thrive to greater heights.

A very short piece, but infused with wisdom and acceptance. Nice work.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Yes, I agree! It takes a lot of courage to acknowledge your weakness even to yourself let alone to b.. read more
I am so glad your diary held tight to your words. It is a strong confession admitting to weakness. Yes, there is much in this world that brings us to our knees; much that can crush us into powder. And yet I know that even in the year since you wrote this you have encountered deeper places in you where your strength rises when you are forced into a corner. Amazing words.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

It's an age old quote : "Our greatest glory is not in never falling, but in rising every time we fal.. read more
An owl on the moon

10 Months Ago

I love that poetry can both inspire us emotionally as well as feed us with wisdom and vision for our.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Yes indeed, we will! ☺

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