Weak

Weak

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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 We think that
 we are strong
 that we can
 withdraw from feelings
pushing right through us
 demanding our fullest attention.
   But we aren't..
    We crumble at its feet, 
   like 
  the
  weak soul
   we are.




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
This was something I wrote about a year ago. Just happened to find it in my long lost diary so thought would share :D

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I like this poem to.
Some of us don't run from our emotions, we let them all out, and even express them though our poetry.
While others think they can avoid what they are feeling run from there emotions, eventually our emotions catch up to us, so its better to just face them.

I like this piece, short but has great meaning behind it :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

I agree! And however brave we think we are, at some point we have to realize that we aren't..
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cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Months Ago

Sometimes you are even stronger when you face your fears and emotions, and stop running from them. <.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

I guess, yes..



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But is it weakness to give way to feelings, or it is weakness to keep them at bay?

You pose the question neatly.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

I think giving in is bad enough... But that is just my opinion 😉
Thank you for your thoug.. read more
I would concur with this view. Many 'issues' can be locked away in mental chests but like most things they tend to leak out in time polluting the 'sterile' - artificial - state we have constructed. Castles of sand is a phrase in mind.

Good observational piece YumnaKay

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

Totally hectic! 😑
What about you?
Tony Jordan

9 Months Ago

Pretty low-key.
If I could do those exams for you I would.
Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

Haha I'd swap anytime 😂😉
I like it. But it leaves me wondering what 'it' is in this poem. A lot of us have an 'it' that makes us crumble. I think you could enhance this poem greatly if you described what it is for you.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

Ah well, the 'it' here is 'feelings'.. We most likely give in to the feelings we don't want to face... read more

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Dr. YumnaKay
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