Weak

Weak

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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 We think that
 we are strong
 that we can
 withdraw from feelings
pushing right through us
 demanding our fullest attention.
   But we aren't..
    We crumble at its feet, 
   like 
  the
  weak soul
   we are.




© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay



Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
This was something I wrote about a year ago. Just happened to find it in my long lost diary so thought would share :D

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Methinks we have feelings for the same reason we have red blood - so we're permanently aware that we have them. Little to worry about, more an acceptance that we're not super-human. Perhaps?

Could have missed this, more than glad i haven't -is sharply written, near defiant in a way. Admitting to being you.. and nothing wrong there!

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Aye, we aren't. Still sometimes feels nice to have the feeling of having everything under control..... read more



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I can so much relate to those words. The feelings are powerful enough to break the metal door shielding us and invade our flesh, proving us weak and fragile beings.
A very true insight.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for sharing your thoughts here, Atiba! Deeply appreciated ☺
The dark story

1 Year Ago

Very welcome 😊
But is it weakness to give way to feelings, or it is weakness to keep them at bay?

You pose the question neatly.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I think giving in is bad enough... But that is just my opinion 😉
Thank you for your thoug.. read more
I would concur with this view. Many 'issues' can be locked away in mental chests but like most things they tend to leak out in time polluting the 'sterile' - artificial - state we have constructed. Castles of sand is a phrase in mind.

Good observational piece YumnaKay

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Totally hectic! 😑
What about you?
Tony Jordan

1 Year Ago

Pretty low-key.
If I could do those exams for you I would.
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Haha I'd swap anytime 😂😉
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I like it. But it leaves me wondering what 'it' is in this poem. A lot of us have an 'it' that makes us crumble. I think you could enhance this poem greatly if you described what it is for you.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ah well, the 'it' here is 'feelings'.. We most likely give in to the feelings we don't want to face... read more

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