Your Touch

Your Touch

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

Just when I had finally decided to let you go, you came back right in. Barging through the almost closed doors of my heart! You made sure they weren't closed until you were through them. 

And here you are, I'm just too tired to make a move. Too tired to say anything. But there again, it seems you don't need any prompting.  

Oh, how my heart races when my eyes meet yours! And although I'm a fool, I can't help making myself believe that this time.. this time you've finally returned, never to leave again.  

Your hands touch mine. You're giving me this shy, 'bring it on' kind of smile and I try not to appear much bothered about it. Why? Because, eventually, I know where we'll end up tonight. 

You're trying so hard not to rush things but at the same time, you're doing what you've always made me feel. Oh, this feels hot as hell! What with your fingers running along in circles over my palm. 

Damn, I can't think straight! This is too much to bear. As you grab me by the waist, I'm rediscovering your touch. I don't want you to stop and it feels as if you aren't going to. 

It's going to be a long night. 

I hope we remember from where we'd left.



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Dr. YumnaKay
Minor changes done. Credits: emmajoy ☺

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This is more like a whispered telling than a piece of writing.. There are errors a speaker makes, there are pauses and repeats.. natural when emotional. And, all the while there's this voice, one's own, guiding the thoughts into action. Tis a passionate finish.. again, more than mere words. t

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Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

Hey, thank you! Would you kindly point out the errors in this piece as I'm kind of new to this sort .. read more



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Oh my... So touching and sensational!
This magnificent piece shows how love can change everything.
Very exotic and cool :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Oh oh this should be under the mature category lol 😛
Thank you for checking this out, Sha.. read more
Mr.Writer

7 Months Ago

Lol XD no problem
And yet another write to the mysterious person

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Oh no lol this is another piece of fiction and imagination 😉😛
It feels like I'm reading you journal. I'm usually into poetry because it makes you feel something. Though this doesn't rhyme I can still imagine what you felt and I've gone thru something just like it. Good work.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

Jessica, thank you so much! I'm glad you felt this piece. This is a purely fiction though and as the.. read more
Powerful confessions of the soul and skin, of love's intoxicating flames. In the music of your heartbeat there is that rushing pulse of light that burns off all darkness and fills the night with fire. One can feel the absolute ecstasy flooding your imagination's kingdom in anticipation. I believe even the sunrise will be blushing when all is awakened.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Craig for the awesome poetic review!
I'm glad you could feel the emotions.. read more
An owl on the moon

9 Months Ago

Ah, nothing ripples with wonder quite like passion. :)
Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

True indeed 😊
Very smooth write, quite lyrical qualities here. Very RnB'sy feel, by way of your word choice. Those 'pasts' always walk the line that borders our lives. Great pour. R xo

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

I agree, they do, only to make us crazier than we already are..
Thank you, Ray, for the nice .. read more
A lovely one, smooth, soft and exciting.

How they walk back so gently in our lives at times, reviving the things we wanted to forget. And still, could never really rid ourselves of and we surrender again to them, to the bits of hope instilled in us.

Makes me think if Frank Ocean's "Never go back to something that hurt
you" is rigid and stubborn or just way too radical for the frequent dreamers..
But never second chances and new beginnings seem so merciless..

I enjoyed reading this. Very nice.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

I agree, it seems we never really learn how to let go entirely, always keeping a tiny flame lit insi.. read more
This is more like a whispered telling than a piece of writing.. There are errors a speaker makes, there are pauses and repeats.. natural when emotional. And, all the while there's this voice, one's own, guiding the thoughts into action. Tis a passionate finish.. again, more than mere words. t

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

Hey, thank you! Would you kindly point out the errors in this piece as I'm kind of new to this sort .. read more
You told yourself you'd never stay no matter how good they are in other ways, whoops! back to the drawing board.
'bring it on kid' kind of smile, very slick line!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

Hahah thank you, MP! I find the whole idea of love as slick 😛
I appreciate your take on t.. read more
mercy party

9 Months Ago

i just wrote my first blog about it, my take on love. ck it out.
It only takes a touch, and we're at the brink of no return. It can melt you down, send your heart into palpitations...and that's just for starters!

It's the falling in of love...and who can resist?

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

Thank you, Kelly! For adding your thoughts here! I agree and I do appreciate ☺
I really, really love this, Yumna! Amazing work, lovely penned. I wish it was a long story. I just want to read more :)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

Hahah, Gullia thank you so much! I have yet to find my way towards the erotica in prose lol
I.. read more

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