Your Touch

Your Touch

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

Just when I had finally decided to let you go, you came back right in. Barging through the almost closed doors of my heart! You made sure they weren't closed until you were through them. 

And here you are, I'm just too tired to make a move. Too tired to say anything. But there again, it seems you don't need any prompting.  

Oh, how my heart races when my eyes meet yours! And although I'm a fool, I can't help making myself believe that this time.. this time you've finally returned, never to leave again.  

Your hands touch mine. You're giving me this shy, 'bring it on' kind of smile and I try not to appear much bothered about it. Why? Because, eventually, I know where we'll end up tonight. 

You're trying so hard not to rush things but at the same time, you're doing what you've always made me feel. Oh, this feels hot as hell! What with your fingers running along in circles over my palm. 

Damn, I can't think straight! This is too much to bear. As you grab me by the waist, I'm rediscovering your touch. I don't want you to stop and it feels as if you aren't going to. 

It's going to be a long night. 

I hope we remember from where we'd left.



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Dr. YumnaKay
Minor changes done. Credits: emmajoy ☺

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This is more like a whispered telling than a piece of writing.. There are errors a speaker makes, there are pauses and repeats.. natural when emotional. And, all the while there's this voice, one's own, guiding the thoughts into action. Tis a passionate finish.. again, more than mere words. t

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Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Hey, thank you! Would you kindly point out the errors in this piece as I'm kind of new to this sort .. read more



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Brought here by Tony Jordan's homage and glad I came. A remarkable piece of water flowing writing telling a very sensuous and all too familiar story. I am impressed.

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Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much! I'm much humbled by your appreciation!
Tony has gone out of his way to ma.. read more
Yumna this is too good..... when u love some one even if they hurt us....when they come back to us....it's just like we are not in control....we just let them drive us crazy ....I like the line...I try not to appear much bothered about it. Because, eventually, I know where we'll end up tonight. ...
You conveyed it in simple words the whole msg.... keep writing ..

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Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Hey, yes I agree! Some people just know how to manipulate others...
Thank you so much for app.. read more
I really loved this, YumnaKay.
I like how you left things with such a simple sentence, and it's up to the reader to imagine the coming events.
You write straightforwardly and beautifully. Fantastic work. :)

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Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

I've yet to find the courage to actually write it all in prose and that's what made me stop abruptly.. read more
Casey Lou

10 Months Ago

You'll find it. ;)
I think the ending is actually perfect for this story, so there's the silv.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Hahah okay! Thanks again ☺
I loved reading this....Your words are simply charming, capturing the moment so vividly

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Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you, Jibey! I found myself too short of words here because of which I couldn't describe the de.. read more

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