Your Touch

Fictional.

Just when I had finally decided to let you go, you came back right in. Barging through the almost closed doors of my heart! You made sure they weren't closed until you were through them. 

And here you are, I'm just too tired to make a move. Too tired to say anything. But there again, it seems you don't need any prompting.  

Oh, how my heart races when my eyes meet yours! And although I'm a fool, I can't help but make myself believe that this time.. this time you've finally returned, never to leave again.  

Your hands touch mine. You're giving me this shy, bring it on kind of smile and I try not to appear much bothered about it. Why? Because, eventually, I know where we'll end up tonight. ..

You're trying so hard not to rush things but at the same time, you're doing what you've always made me feel. Oh, this feels hot as hell! What with your fingers running along in circles over my palm ..

Damn, I can't think straight! This is too much to bear. As you grab me by the waist, I'm rediscovering your touch. I don't want you to stop and it feels as if you aren't going to. 

It's going to be a long night. 

I hope we remember from where we'd left.

Author's Note

Minor changes done. Credits: emmajoy ☺

Reviews

[emmajoy]

This is more like a whispered telling than a piece of writing.. There are errors a speaker makes, there are pauses and repeats.. natural when emotional. And, all the while there's this voice, one's own, guiding the thoughts into action. Tis a passionate finish.. again, more than mere words. t

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hey, thank you! Would you kindly point out the errors in this piece as I'm kind of new to this sort of writing but ready to improve 😉
I appreciate your take on this ☺

[emmajoy]

November 2018.. For me, dear friend, this whispers.. as it should. Such tender thoughts and feelings, private, precious, passionate. Meant for that one other person who means anything, everything. You've written probably less than this review will be, but, you've told an entire and beautiful dream come true. Wonderful in every aspect a post should include and, that's nothing to do with my hints but your skill absolute. x

[Dr. YumnaKay]

It's strange reading it again and knowing how much time has passed since I wrote it. I think your hints do inspire me to write on, Em. xx

[emmajoy]

We're here to help each other in whatever way. You so often help and inspire me too! :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

It only takes a touch, and we're at the brink of no return. It can melt you down, send your heart into palpitations...and that's just for starters!

It's the falling in of love...and who can resist?

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Kelly! For adding your thoughts here! I agree and I do appreciate ☺

[Giulia King]

I really, really love this, Yumna! Amazing work, lovely penned. I wish it was a long story. I just want to read more :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah, Gullia thank you so much! I have yet to find my way towards the erotica in prose lol
I'm glad you liked it! It means a lot to me 💜

[Ken Simm.]

Brought here by Tony Jordan's homage and glad I came. A remarkable piece of water flowing writing telling a very sensuous and all too familiar story. I am impressed.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much! I'm much humbled by your appreciation!
Tony has gone out of his way to make me famous 😉

[Ardra]

Yumna this is too good..... when u love some one even if they hurt us....when they come back to us....it's just like we are not in control....we just let them drive us crazy ....I like the line...I try not to appear much bothered about it. Because, eventually, I know where we'll end up tonight. ...
You conveyed it in simple words the whole msg.... keep writing ..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hey, yes I agree! Some people just know how to manipulate others...
Thank you so much for appreciating this work! I'm glad you liked it ☺

[Casey Lou]

I really loved this, YumnaKay.
I like how you left things with such a simple sentence, and it's up to the reader to imagine the coming events.
You write straightforwardly and beautifully. Fantastic work. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I've yet to find the courage to actually write it all in prose and that's what made me stop abruptly..
But thank you for appreciating, Casey! I'm glad that you liked it ☺ it means a lot ☺

[Casey Lou]

You'll find it. ;)
I think the ending is actually perfect for this story, so there's the silver lining, haha. Brilliant work.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah okay! Thanks again ☺

[Jibey]

I loved reading this....Your words are simply charming, capturing the moment so vividly

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Jibey! I found myself too short of words here because of which I couldn't describe the details of the real thing lol
I'm glad you enjoyed this ☺