Gratitude ~ For Tony Jordan

Gratitude ~ For Tony Jordan

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Good friends are like stars... you don't always see them, but you know that they're always there.

"
In a world
where friendship works
as give and take,

in a world 
where selflessness seems
hard to believe,

in a world 
where love lurks
in shadows,

in a world 
where darkness prevails
over light,


some people are just there.
Silent; yet ever present ...




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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"Silent, yet ever present"

Oh, Dr.Yumna, I love how you play beautifully with words. It's aspiring!! This is SO good!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

1 Year Ago

Ha ha ha! No, I have read some of your previous ones, they're equally amazing. It's just that you're.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Careful there, Ghania. Some people might not like you saying that about me lmaooo jk thanks again xx
Ghania

1 Year Ago

Ha ha ha!!! Oopsiee. I don't give af(lamingo)!!
I like your work. And that's it. Also, nobod.. read more
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Ty
"In a world where darkness prevails
over light" Truth. Let the truth be told

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your words here :)
Very nice poem to show gratitude that uses different emotions as well :)
How sweet of you
Keep it up

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for appreciating this one as well, Shaan. :))
A great tribute to the recipient and a sweet reflection on the writer too. When you really know exactly who and what people are, there's always something very special in residence.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

The least I could do to the kindness Tony shows...
There is something special indeed in some .. read more
A friendship that never waxes or wanes. Affection lurks in the shadows, invisible yet ever present.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your thoughts :)
This is a very nice thing you did here

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Well, I am proud to have written this. Thank you 😊
This is a wonderful piece, even if it feels like you're alone, if you have that one true friend, you're really not alone. What a great write, nicely done :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Absolutely yes! I feel blessed really 😊
Thank you for liking, Kesha! Means a lot 😊😊
Kesha

1 Year Ago

Thats good :) and you are welcome! :D
A observation penned in gratitude for the good character of another. A rare find both :) I.I.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

It is a rare find, I agree! Thank you for your thoughts 😊
Isabella Ivy

1 Year Ago

Thank you for allowing me to read your work! :) I.I.
I agree. Presence of some such precious people makes one a blessed one. A good piece for your friend..

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Indeed they do. Thank you, Bala! I'm glad you liked this one :)
Bala Gorthi

1 Year Ago

You are welcome.
Aloha,

This one is lovely and so very true.

Thanks for sharing..

Alisa

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)

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