Glassless Windows

Glassless Windows

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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They say:
"Eyes are the windows 
to one's soul."

But my windows;
they're glassless,
with only a frame.

I let you see,
what I want
to be seen.

And I avert
my eyes away
from your face.

Because the darkness
of my soul ...
would consume you

~ whole ~ 



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
Edited version.

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Beautifully written and melancholic at the same time, Yumna :-)
Quite an interesting take on eyes and it's beholder. I too somehow feel that eyes act as a window to one's soul but people tend to see on the basis of their own perceptions or by the way we are showing ourselves to them. I really liked the ending as it is giving out a very touching and heart felt reasoning.
I loved the fluidity and thought of this poem. Lovely piece :-) :-)

PS: Sometimes our writings too act as a window to our soul (just a thought)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

I think so too, Gorthi. It seems somewhat easier to express yourself through words in a write than i.. read more



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Yes, the eyes are the lamp of ones heart, anything that may go through can affect such emotions

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

True. Thank you for your thoughts here, Sire 😊
very true. great piece of poetry. sometimes we fool people into thinking they know us when we only show them what we want to. beautiful. keep it up! :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Yeah, true indeed. Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked this one :)
CherryEllie

8 Months Ago

no problem! can't wait for more :)
Very interesting poem. The metaphor you used is great and i'll defenitely remember it. Nice work :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you for the appreciation. I'm glad you liked it :)
Beautifully written and melancholic at the same time, Yumna :-)
Quite an interesting take on eyes and it's beholder. I too somehow feel that eyes act as a window to one's soul but people tend to see on the basis of their own perceptions or by the way we are showing ourselves to them. I really liked the ending as it is giving out a very touching and heart felt reasoning.
I loved the fluidity and thought of this poem. Lovely piece :-) :-)

PS: Sometimes our writings too act as a window to our soul (just a thought)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

I think so too, Gorthi. It seems somewhat easier to express yourself through words in a write than i.. read more
Others can often see into a person's soul more than they realise... and what to the individual seems dark, can be warm, mysterious and arousing...

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

That's an interesting point. It could be if you have the eyes to see right through..
Thank yo.. read more
Wow. This poem is very thoughtful. Loved it.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you, Najam! So very kind of you to say :)
Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

You are welcome ☺
this is certainly an introspective view of onself. i like the honesty and truth in this. the sad conclusion is a little unnerving. deep on many levels. a good, creative write!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you for your thoughts here and for liking! Truly appreciate it 😊
Pete

8 Months Ago

welcome. :)
Hmm. Slightly menacing!

No need for an edit. Perfectly fine as it is. Your theme is a common occurrence in everyday life. For whatever reasons, we humans are very efficient at covering up our true selves. And only revealing this true self to those we deem worthy of that knowledge.

A lovely take on a universal idea, with a beautiful picture to go alongside it. Nicely written.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

I might be adding to it, that's what I meant by editing..
I agree with you, it's quite easy h.. read more
My windows,
they are glassless,
with only a frame - ah I love this so much! Clever metaphor and effective imagery here!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it 😊
"the darkness
of my soul would
consume you whole" I looove those lines!
It's better to have glass-less windows than to cover them with rose colored glasses :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Rightly said! Thank you so much 😊

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