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Glassless Windows

Glassless Windows

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental.

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They say:
"Eyes are the windows 
to one's soul."

But my windows;
they're glassless,
with only a frame.

I let you see,
what I want
to be seen.

And I avert
my eyes away
from your face.

Because the darkness
of my soul ...
would consume you

~ whole ~ 



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
Edited version.

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Beautifully written and melancholic at the same time, Yumna :-)
Quite an interesting take on eyes and it's beholder. I too somehow feel that eyes act as a window to one's soul but people tend to see on the basis of their own perceptions or by the way we are showing ourselves to them. I really liked the ending as it is giving out a very touching and heart felt reasoning.
I loved the fluidity and thought of this poem. Lovely piece :-) :-)

PS: Sometimes our writings too act as a window to our soul (just a thought)

Posted 7 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

I think so too, Gorthi. It seems somewhat easier to express yourself through words in a write than i.. read more



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"because, the darkness of my soul would consume u whole"
It created a strong impact..

Nice poem

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it 😊
I like this piece. Nice work.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it 😊
Nice write, better to be a soul with depth than a window that's reflective. The eyes do have this soul attachment having a black iris. And we do show what we like to show.

Posted 7 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

I find it quite interesting to deceive people into believing what they see 😉
Thank you, A.. read more
Interesting perception. Reminds me of see-through eyes but controlled by the possessor not by the observer. Nicely penned seems still a little raw to be honest but it's a lovely basis for a good poem.
Again nice image you chose for your piece. I stay away from adding images as I want the readers to create their own ones.. But my mind is always so full of intense imagery, I often think more than in others...

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Hahaha no! It wasn't you! It was the fact that people here thought either I'm totally lovesick or go.. read more
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7 Months Ago

Hm ok sorry I couldn't be your muse 😒lol. 😛

I agree to your words and now I'll .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Haha okay 😛😂

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Experimental Poetry


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Dr. YumnaKay
Dr. YumnaKay

Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



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