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Doesn't Feel Like Love

Doesn't Feel Like Love

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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you claim your love, 
it's you who stole my heart
yet it doesn't 
feel like love.

you breathe in my breaths, 
it's you that I inhale, exhale 
yet it doesn't 
feel like love.

you dance in my dreams,
it's you in my subconscious mind
yet it doesn't
feel like love.

it doesn't...
it doesn't 
feel
like love.. 



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
Boredom strikes again...

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Hi Yumna. You've been kind enough to comment on some of my work, so I thought I'd return the favour. I looked at several of your more recent ones, but it was this one that I homed in on. Why? I think I find it more accessible. I like the repeats, and the phrases feel real. It's quite short and of course somewhat sad, but it holds together pretty well.

KRs
Nigel

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Hi, Nigel! This is probably the last piece I wrote before I indulged in learning poetical forms.. read more



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Wow, I really see where your potential comes from, Poetry is natural, so natural even boredom submits to it :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Hmm I feel it comes more natural to me when I'm bored as compared to when I really want to write .. read more
Hi Yumna. You've been kind enough to comment on some of my work, so I thought I'd return the favour. I looked at several of your more recent ones, but it was this one that I homed in on. Why? I think I find it more accessible. I like the repeats, and the phrases feel real. It's quite short and of course somewhat sad, but it holds together pretty well.

KRs
Nigel

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Hi, Nigel! This is probably the last piece I wrote before I indulged in learning poetical forms.. read more
Love, I understand comes in a package which does not always feel roses and sunshine. May be that is the time we do some homework I guess. Yumna, spot on with your ideas again. Loved it.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

I agree! It's a complex phenomenon. Something which needs more time but we're prone to rush..
.. read more
Deeeeeply Abused

8 Months Ago

Welcome so much :)
Being comfortable with another and loving that "other" are not necessarily the same. Hot passion and romance and love are also two different things. It becomes tricky to discern sometimes. Love and being in love, that is the question. Well written poem that leave the question unanswered- most excellent!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

I quite agree! Thankfully I have yet to fall in love to discern it 😉
Thank you so much fo.. read more
Love, confusion, boredom all seems to be a family.
They strike us all at once and damage us.
But still we all thrive for it. That's love.:) Very good writing :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

That's an amazing summary! Thank you so much for your thoughts and for liking, Manasa 😊
Hmmm If you're having these thoughts about something it's best to leave before someone gets hurt badly. On the poem though, I really liked the humdrum feelings and the boredom of being stuck in a relationship you no longer vie for. Nicely written :) as always ;)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Lol this was written in my times of boredom.. It's nothing too serious for me, I was merely playing .. read more
Kesha

8 Months Ago

You are very welcome :) & thats good!
Like a lot of things love isn't like what it used to be. So many refer to the older days as examples of love rather than this modern mundane world. You poem was well is expressed, filled with feeling. Tyfs!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

I agree. Love is a vast emotion which we easily twist...
Thank you for liking and sharing you.. read more
Cyprian Van Dyke

8 Months Ago

You're most welcome
Love can be confusing..until it isn't and then you know it's love. Your poem is beautiful. :) Julie

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Yes I agree with your thoughts here.
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)
Haha, truly a confused state.....i say stop talking to someone for days if you feel the same then its something or else just leave it......
Your confused poem did shown exact feelings of a confused person.....
I liked it...:)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you! Fortunately that confused person ain't me ;) This was just me playing around with words :.. read more
Nicely written. A lot of people are confused about their feelings, mind says one thing and heart says the opposite. I loved the way you put that perspective into this poem. Love seems too complicated here..very nicely done YumnaKay 😃

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

I agree it is..
Thank you, Michael, for your thoughts and the appreciation! It means a lot .. read more

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