Last Breath of Goodbye

Last Breath of Goodbye

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Composed in Free Style...

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Last Breath of Goodbye

What was left from before,
powerfully merciless;
like dark, ominous clouds
smothering every semblance
of inner light,
has now returned...

That hellhole of your love 
you cast me into,
every inch of my skin crawled,
left the carmine softness
of my heart charred,
my soul burned!

Our last breath of goodbye
lingers in the air …
waiting,
wishing,
wanting,
for me to accept
not having you by my side.

That flame I kept alive;
those embers,
like hot desert winds ~ dried,
sparking back to life...
leave me no choice, 
except to cast them
...all aside!

Thank you J Todd Underhill for giving this piece a voice

 https://soundcloud.com/user-557255780/coffee-with-underhill-05-01-2017





© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
Yet another learning experience of writing poetry with Richard :)

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Breathtaking experience... wow... omg...! This was amazing!

"What was left from before,
powerfully merciless;
like dark, ominous clouds"
Very descriptive and flows well!
Keep it up! :)
Your learning experience with Richard are working very well :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Well, as of now, they're on hold lol
Thank you for liking this one too. I appreciate your wo.. read more
Mr.Writer

1 Year Ago

Lol no problem :D



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I truly enjoyed your scenic beauty specially the end of it...aside....matters a lot..

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

True, it does..
Thank you, Surya! I'm glad you liked it 😊
Loved the ending where it all just got casted aside! Nicely written :) I really enjoyed the color of the font too! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yeah isn't it like that in real life too, you get to cast it all aside lol
Thank you for appr.. read more
Kesha

1 Year Ago

Yes it is :) you are welcome, as always :)
That hellhole of your love
you cast me into,
every inch of my skin crawled,
left the carmine softness
of my heart charred,
my soul burned!

Wow u left me breathless ....this one touches my soul and sings to me of the pain.....it's painfully the truth when you let go of someone you hold close to......thanks for sharing this wonderful creation

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I agree. It's painful indeed. I feel sad that you can relate to this write...
Thank you for l.. read more
Ardra

1 Year Ago

The pic is beautiful too......it reminds me of the fragments being washed away from soul...
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yeah it reminded me of that too...
Lovely poem..my sould burned too.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Atashusi! I'm glad you liked it 😊

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Dr. YumnaKay

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I would call myself a writer but I don't feel accomplished or learned enough to consider myself anywhere near as one. I write mainly to clear the weird buzzing in my mind and heart (but I suppose that.. more..

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