Essence of Your Scent

Essence of Your Scent

A Poem by YumnaKay
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Essence of Your Scent

You held me when I needed it most;
your embrace gently soothed my heart,
making me forget all sorrows,
while basking in the essence of your scent.

Your deep blue ocean eyes 
made it easier for me to swim and rise... 
you held my hand, protecting me 
from the cruel world's ravaging waves.

In the essence of your scent I felt free,
like flying birds, chirping away;
with not a worry on their feathery wings...
my eyes close, there's only you; all the rest, a blur!

© 2017 YumnaKay



Author's Note

YumnaKay
This came out of nowhere. Just trying to write something different :)

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Gentle and beautiful journey in your words dear friend.
"Your deep blue ocean eyes
made it easier for me to swim and rise...
you held my hand, protecting me
from the cruel world's ravaging waves."
The ravaging sea. A beautiful place to know. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

4 Days Ago

Thank you! Truly appreciate your liking my words 😊😊
Coyote Poetry

4 Days Ago

I love your work and you are welcome dear friend.



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Beautiful flow and imagery. I was sad that the poem had an end.

Posted 4 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

4 Hours Ago

Thank you so much, Cyprian! Truly appreciate your words 😊
This is a very lovely piece here ma'am, trying​ something different is always interesting... Great Job☺

Poeticme

Posted 8 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

8 Hours Ago

Thank you for the appreciation. I'm glad you like it 😊
I love when words are coming out. Great job on this one :)

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

1 Day Ago

Thank you, Gullia! I'm glad you liked this one 😊
This sounds so real, where is the false in this? It's like a moment you have just lived.

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

3 Days Ago

I'm glad it sounds real. But to me, it's an observation on the part of someone else. Not me..
.. read more
Softly beautiful writing. You seem to have changed/improved your style a lot. I really like this one. A bright and positive piece for the beginning of spring. xo

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Βανέσα

2 Days Ago

Haha yeah lol.

What you can be Everything. Would pretty cool though. I think if I wa.. read more
YumnaKay

2 Days Ago

That would be after... Right now, I'm certain of my career as a dentist only lol

But.. read more
Βανέσα

2 Days Ago

Haha. Yeah stick to dentist for a while then.
It's a good job also. 😛
So in love. I like how you put a soothing sound by choosing words that would truly create a music at the back of it. Nice.

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

3 Days Ago

Thank you for this wonderful review and for liking, C! Really means a lot to me 😊
CAPOLAVORO

3 Days Ago

You are very much welcome.
Beautiful imagery. That feeling of security and joy felt being with someone is put across wonderfully. Your words made me feel those too.
Very well written. Thank you for sharing:)

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

3 Days Ago

Thank you, Krutika! I'm glad you felt the depth of my words. Really means a lot 😊
I like this! I like the way the title comes into the poem but not till the 4th line, and then re-emerges at the start of V3 - very nice continuity and flow. All the rest, a blur! Nice way of showing the focus on the 'you'.

Nice job!

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

4 Days Ago

Thank you for your kind comments, Nigel. Really means a lot to me 😊
Gentle and beautiful journey in your words dear friend.
"Your deep blue ocean eyes
made it easier for me to swim and rise...
you held my hand, protecting me
from the cruel world's ravaging waves."
The ravaging sea. A beautiful place to know. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

4 Days Ago

Thank you! Truly appreciate your liking my words 😊😊
Coyote Poetry

4 Days Ago

I love your work and you are welcome dear friend.
Sigh.. I could feel so much love here. Don't tell me it came out of nowhere when it doesn't look like that. The words you wove were beautiful. I so love it. Sweet.

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

4 Days Ago

Ahh out of nowhere meant I didn't intend to write in this way. I was trying to write a freestyle poe.. read more

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Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



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