Essence of Your Scent

Essence of Your Scent

A Poem by YumnaKay
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Essence of Your Scent

You held me when I needed it most;
your embrace gently soothed my heart,
making me forget all sorrows,
while basking in the essence of your scent.

Your deep blue ocean eyes 
made it easier for me to swim and rise... 
you held my hand, protecting me 
from the cruel world's ravaging waves.

In the essence of your scent I felt free,
like flying birds, chirping away;
with not a worry on their feathery wings...
my eyes close, there's only you; all the rest, a blur!

© 2017 YumnaKay



Author's Note

YumnaKay
This came out of nowhere. Just trying to write something different :)

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I feel it! I feel it! The words are flowing gently in my soul and heart... Wait for it... wait for it! BOOM! Now, I can write my review :)
Beautiful... engaging... powerful! It shows how much your loved ones do and can do for you! This poem shows that one person can make such a difference in your life! You portrayed the message very well in this poem! Keep it up! :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

True. and I cherish all my loved ones :)
Thank you for this wonderful review. I'm glad you li.. read more
Mr.Writer

3 Months Ago

No problem!



Reviews

I feel it! I feel it! The words are flowing gently in my soul and heart... Wait for it... wait for it! BOOM! Now, I can write my review :)
Beautiful... engaging... powerful! It shows how much your loved ones do and can do for you! This poem shows that one person can make such a difference in your life! You portrayed the message very well in this poem! Keep it up! :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

True. and I cherish all my loved ones :)
Thank you for this wonderful review. I'm glad you li.. read more
Mr.Writer

3 Months Ago

No problem!
Out of spontaneity sometimes comes unexpected beauty. Genuinely knowing the want and need in a partner or friend in times of need is well reflected here, very warmly done.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

True... Thank you for adding your thoughts here and for liking. I appreciate it 😊
J Manuel

3 Months Ago

Your Welcome
Beautiful flow and imagery. I was sad that the poem had an end.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Cyprian! Truly appreciate your words 😊
This is a very lovely piece here ma'am, trying​ something different is always interesting... Great Job☺

Poeticme

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you for the appreciation. I'm glad you like it 😊
I love when words are coming out. Great job on this one :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Gullia! I'm glad you liked this one 😊
This sounds so real, where is the false in this? It's like a moment you have just lived.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

I'm glad it sounds real. But to me, it's an observation on the part of someone else. Not me..
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Softly beautiful writing. You seem to have changed/improved your style a lot. I really like this one. A bright and positive piece for the beginning of spring. xo

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

3 Months Ago

Haha yeah lol.

What you can be Everything. Would pretty cool though. I think if I wa.. read more
YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

That would be after... Right now, I'm certain of my career as a dentist only lol

But.. read more
Closed

3 Months Ago

Haha. Yeah stick to dentist for a while then.
It's a good job also. 😛
So in love. I like how you put a soothing sound by choosing words that would truly create a music at the back of it. Nice.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you for this wonderful review and for liking, C! Really means a lot to me 😊
CAPOLAVORO

3 Months Ago

You are very much welcome.
Beautiful imagery. That feeling of security and joy felt being with someone is put across wonderfully. Your words made me feel those too.
Very well written. Thank you for sharing:)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Krutika! I'm glad you felt the depth of my words. Really means a lot 😊
I like this! I like the way the title comes into the poem but not till the 4th line, and then re-emerges at the start of V3 - very nice continuity and flow. All the rest, a blur! Nice way of showing the focus on the 'you'.

Nice job!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind comments, Nigel. Really means a lot to me 😊

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Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



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