Essence of Your Scent

Essence of Your Scent

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Essence of Your Scent

You held me when I needed it most;
your embrace gently soothed my heart,
making me forget all sorrows,
while basking in the essence of your scent.

Your deep blue ocean eyes 
made it easier for me to swim and rise... 
you held my hand, protecting me 
from the cruel world's ravaging waves.

In the essence of your scent I felt free,
like flying birds, chirping away;
with not a worry on their feathery wings...
my eyes close, there's only you; all the rest, a blur!



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
This came out of nowhere. Just trying to write something different :)

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I feel it! I feel it! The words are flowing gently in my soul and heart... Wait for it... wait for it! BOOM! Now, I can write my review :)
Beautiful... engaging... powerful! It shows how much your loved ones do and can do for you! This poem shows that one person can make such a difference in your life! You portrayed the message very well in this poem! Keep it up! :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

True. and I cherish all my loved ones :)
Thank you for this wonderful review. I'm glad you li.. read more
Mr.Writer

8 Months Ago

No problem!



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Haha, affection rite, well a fictional belief, but sometimes sounds true...anyways it was good..:)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

This was fiction 😉
I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for appreciating 😊😊
Mmmm blue eye they say you should not trust them ....;)
I started believing after my experiences Heheh...very beautiful lines dear...

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Ahh well I think whatever colour, it depends on how sincere the person is 😉
Thank you! I'.. read more
Galadriel

8 Months Ago

These days u get lens of all colours. ... I loved it.
Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Hahah true indeed. Interesting perspective 😛😂
"all the rest, a blur!" great expression. I enjoyed the read very much. Have you thought how it would have been if it was written in the present tense?
I mean unless, you are reminiscing something that happened in the past. I found it beautiful either way. However, I am a fan of writing present tense...lol.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Ahh, well to be honest, these are just words. No reminiscing or anything. Pure fiction lol so I didn.. read more
Deeeeeply Abused

8 Months Ago

My pleasure and I am really impressed to see you evoked such emotion with fiction.
Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Most of my romantic pieces are fiction, Queen ;)
Romantic, sweet and cute...
You can do better, but I liked this one..
Good luck ;).

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you! I hope to do better 😉
Wow. Seems that they are so immensely lost in each other. And I was lost in reading such a romantic poem. I could imagine the scene. I loved this one.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you, Najam! I'm glad you liked this one! Means a lot to me :)
Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

You're always welcome ☺

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