Devoid of Emotion

Devoid of Emotion

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Devoid of Emotion

Your betrayal,
the final nail 
in our love's coffin …

my heart's
now devoid of 
emotion.

What I'd thought of,
as brimming love,
'twas but mere illusion!

You made me drink, 
through your mystical eyes,
that deathly dark potion
of naïve emotion ...

which tore my soul apart,
freezing its heart
beyond repair!


     
     



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Again, in a time yesteryear i would resonate with this. Ive been there myself, and was tricked by the fake who stood in front of me at the time. It hurts yes, it gets better...yes (happiest ive ever been now)
But when all is said and done. THEY are the the ones who will suffer the guilt and karma will come.

I do like your use of words with this....it has a very dark feel too it.

Mark.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

I'm saddened to know you can relate with my words here. But thank you for the appreciation, Mark. Me.. read more



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A wonderful poem.
The strong emotion is very well communicated.
I enjoyed.:)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed 😊
Neetha

6 Months Ago

My pleasure..
And slowly but surely the heart will thaw at a cautious careful pace, how beautiful it turns colors from blue to pink

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Nah, in this case it's permanently blue lol 😉😛
Ah!!!....Something many can relate to I'm sure, once again a beautiful piece of writing from you. I enjoy when I read your work...It always takes me away, or reminds me of a time...Wonderfully penned my friend

Poeticme

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Thank you! I'm much humbled by your comments. Glad you like it 😊😊
Poeticme

7 Months Ago

Your very welcome my friend...Love the frozen heart pic, fits like a glove😊
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

I love it too 😊😊
Cryogenic love? I'm sure we've all experienced this as I like to dub it "false forevers". If some haven't it is inevitable. You've captured the essence it her as always.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michael G. Smith

7 Months Ago

I always hated it when I gave my whole heart and the girl would always say "I Love You forever" and .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Hahahah girls generally are sugary when it comes to love lol.. And 'forever' is a good word to make .. read more
Michael G. Smith

7 Months Ago

I wrote a poem titled Forever

You and I like "forever"
Once were, two words read more
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BBP
Of course the title reeled me in, but you played the words well. Pouring the last bit of blood from a frozen heart!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Hahah I just accept it as I really am most of the times 😂😂
BBP

7 Months Ago

LOL It's a good thing, means we are oversensitive crybabies! lol
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Hahah no!!! That doesn't fit for me, Bev lol I'm like that in the writings only 😉😉😂😂
Whoa! Powerful! You always manage to make the reader "feel" your words, Yumnka. I think we all, at least once in our lives will or have experienced this. As I said, powerful and sharp; very emotive.
Love the frozen heart picture, too! It delivers impact.
Love your poetry. Short but truly emotional.
Wonderful!! :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina H.W.

7 Months Ago

Aw, we all feel like that from time to time. I guess it all help to create and write create poetry s.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Of course.. It does help reflect..
Tina H.W.

7 Months Ago

I think I understand..:)
Yunankay,

There are , of course , certain understandings and its success and failures . When it matters for a creative attempt the deep truth inside such might be upheld without nostalgia.
Any how the concern of genuine emotion which generates the inspiration or shall we call the URGE for an attempt is not ruled out.
A writer will have to be subjective and objective at the same time like double minded "THOMAS"
He/she has no escape from the said gossip.
Take it easy.......

create it honestly and win over such ....
carry on.........

mp

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Err right.. Are you always that cryptic or it's just for my writings?
Thanks anyways for rea.. read more
M P Ramesh

7 Months Ago

I read and do comment.
nothing more because I also imbibe something afresh always
oth.. read more
Starting to almost feel a beat in your freestyles... This was another one that impressed with the word choice and emotional landscape made... Have you ever tried free-writing to a beat or instrumental? Might be fun, who knows... Either way...Darkly penned...

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Yup seriously.. Unless you count those Shakespearean sonnets which were compulsory in school 😛
Silente

7 Months Ago

No one enjoys compulsory anything... Hah, I... Am quite stunned by that... You are probably what, mi.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

I'm younger than that lol early 20's 😉😛
Yeah I'm glad too that I found it 😊😊
Very true! Very true! I agree with this fab poem of Yumnas, 'twas a very dark poem yumna, very dark'
Great job Yumna! This is my fav line!!
"What I'd thought of,
as brimming love,
'twas but mere illusion!"
Expresses alot of stuff! It's pure lies, the lies that your lover says he'll fulfill, but never does

Keep it up!



Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Thank you for this poetic review, Shaan. Made me smile.
I agree, it's mostly just lies.. I ap.. read more
Mr.Writer

7 Months Ago

No problem!
Again, in a time yesteryear i would resonate with this. Ive been there myself, and was tricked by the fake who stood in front of me at the time. It hurts yes, it gets better...yes (happiest ive ever been now)
But when all is said and done. THEY are the the ones who will suffer the guilt and karma will come.

I do like your use of words with this....it has a very dark feel too it.

Mark.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

I'm saddened to know you can relate with my words here. But thank you for the appreciation, Mark. Me.. read more

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