Devoid of Emotion

Devoid of Emotion

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Devoid of Emotion

Your betrayal,
the final nail 
in our love's coffin …

my heart's
now devoid of 
emotion.

What I'd thought of,
as brimming love,
'twas but mere illusion!

You made me drink, 
through your mystical eyes,
that deathly dark potion
of naïve emotion ...

which tore my soul apart,
freezing its heart
beyond repair!


     
     



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Again, in a time yesteryear i would resonate with this. Ive been there myself, and was tricked by the fake who stood in front of me at the time. It hurts yes, it gets better...yes (happiest ive ever been now)
But when all is said and done. THEY are the the ones who will suffer the guilt and karma will come.

I do like your use of words with this....it has a very dark feel too it.

Mark.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

I'm saddened to know you can relate with my words here. But thank you for the appreciation, Mark. Me.. read more



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This is beautiful, Yumna! I see a change in you and I'm happy for you :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Hahah what? You're happy that I'm now devoid of emotion?? 😂😂 I'm kidding, Gullia, thank you so.. read more
I'm not sure but it feels like there is still more to be said, either way this was a wonderful and heartbreaking piece! It would suck to be left with no emotion! Nicely written :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kesha

8 Months Ago

In your backyard with a shovel? Lol
Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

haha yeah something like that ;P it'll probably crop up soon lol
Kesha

8 Months Ago

Lol the rain will wash it up ;P
Such a heartbreak of words.. emotions raw and weeping. Is what I call sadly beautiful, words laid explicitly but never to slicing through reality. You have a magic pen, YumnaKay.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating, Emma. I would gladly exchange this magic pen with a magic wand to change.. read more
emmajoy

8 Months Ago

Have thought the same for most of my years at the café.
Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

And I for the few months I've spent here...
Very sad poem, very sad story of heartbreak.
I like the way you have described the way the heartbreak felt.
I really like the rhyme scheme and the way the poem was set out.
Nice picture at the end to.
Filled with meaning and tons of emotion this poem.
Well done keep writing :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you, Cimmy! I'm glad the words touched you. Really means a lot to me 😊
cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Months Ago

Your welcome :) I'm glad
Wow...I guess it would be less for your write from me, and truly in love with this one, specially the last stanza.....:)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Surya

8 Months Ago

Haha, no I don't mean such, I mean to say wow is a small word i could say to your write...That's it,.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Lol okay I misunderstood 😂😂
Experiments is a good word 😊
Thanks again 😊.. read more
Surya

8 Months Ago

You are welcome Yumna..:)
What an incredible piece...directly from a suffering heart in need. Thank you for opening a window and allowing us to peer inside, if only for a moment.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you, Anastasia! It's good to write sometimes what you feel..
I'm glad you liked it 😊
Anastasia Purvis

8 Months Ago

very much so.
What I'd thought of,
as brimming love,
'twas but mere illusion!


Wonderfully done yummy ...;)
Some people are just waste of our precious time

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

True indeed. Some people are...
Thank you so much for liking, Ria! Means a lot to me 😊
Naive emotion...I liked it

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Emotions are naive 😉
Thank you for liking 😊
This poem is rich in words and emotions as well.
What I'd thought of,
as brimming love,
'twas but mere illusion!
These lines are my favourite.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you, Najam! I'm glad you liked the emotions in this one 😊
Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

You're welcome ☺
I did enjoy this poem.
"You made me drink,
through your mystical eyes,
that deathly dark potion
of naïve emotion ..."
I do understand the above lines. Mystical eyes had stole my heart a few times. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

These mystical eyes are what hoodwinks us too often..
Thank you so much for liking, Coyote. .. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Months Ago

You are welcome dear friend.

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