Encounter

Encounter

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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In collaboration with Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

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Encounter

Tell me of things you wouldn't say;
and tickle my ears with sin.
Do let me travel...

A new oasis within your soul;
I'd like to sail on your skin.
I beg of your trust.

And as you part the oceanic waves
with a blanket of silver lust;
I will remain.


Let me reach the depths of your heart;
hidden there for so long,
I shall swim.

My imagination, a burden on my shoulders;
grasp me firmly by the hand,
I crave your touch.

And as you surrender in my arms,
with not even a single doubt,
I will stay...

Oh my darling! 
What dangerous game we play...




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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What an exciting and interesting collaboration. Not sure of the colours ^, perhaps they jolt a little.. but the sentiments are most certainly - warming. Writing about passion so often brings out the very best of thoughts and their underlying imagination/ The use of first person third line somehow cements a fragile devotion.

* Can always add a postscript before or after ..

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

The colours here were used to show the sentiments as well as mine and his favourite colour. His bein.. read more
emmajoy

6 Months Ago

I realised that but...

Was/is a very lovely collaboration..



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it took me awhile to understand the aura of the poem... really it was the stunning one...end was beautiful... keep writing !!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating this collab. I'm glad you liked it :)
Abhishek Asthana

6 Months Ago

you are welcome.. awesome piece it was !!
"Tell me of things you wouldn't say;
and tickle my ears with sin." - The imagery is so vivid it gave me Goosebumps!! Its's like I can feel the warm breath upon my on skin!!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Well, I'm glad you felt the intensity of the words here. Thank you for appreciating this collaborati.. read more
So beautiful!! I love the passion and indulgence you have portrayed. My favorite line is "and tickle my ears with sin".
Delicious devilry! ;) Enjoyed the read.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you liked this collaborative effort. Means a lot to me :)
Excellent. Exciting and urgent with sensuality and poise and class.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you for the appreciation. Glad you liked this collab 😊
I really like this, YunnaKay. Some favorite lines: "...and tickle my esrs with sin...", "As you are part of the ocean waves...", "...my imagination...

Well done!

Lori

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating this collaboration, Lori. Glad you liked it 😊
Lori Brown Boniciolli

6 Months Ago

Very welcome, YunnaKay!
A passion filled write, well done.

The image reminded me of home. Izzy

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it😊
Island Hippy

6 Months Ago

You're welcome
To swim and reach for the heart is a wondrous experience.
Love is indeed a very dangerous game.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

It is indeed. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here, Shabeeh. I appreciate it :)
Interesting write guys.
I like it

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you, JayDee! Glad you liked it. Good to see you around :)
What an exciting and interesting collaboration. Not sure of the colours ^, perhaps they jolt a little.. but the sentiments are most certainly - warming. Writing about passion so often brings out the very best of thoughts and their underlying imagination/ The use of first person third line somehow cements a fragile devotion.

* Can always add a postscript before or after ..

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

The colours here were used to show the sentiments as well as mine and his favourite colour. His bein.. read more
emmajoy

6 Months Ago

I realised that but...

Was/is a very lovely collaboration..
"Danger is my middle name..." ha ha!!! Love this. It's so cute and romantic!
Thank you for sharing!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Anastasia Danger Purvis! 😛 I'm really glad you liked this collab! Means a lot .. read more

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