Encounter

Encounter

A Chapter by Dr YumnaKay
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In collaboration with Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

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Encounter

Tell me of things you wouldn't say;
and tickle my ears with sin.
Do let me travel...

a new oasis within your soul;
I'd like to sail on your skin.
I beg of your trust.

And as you part the oceanic waves
with a blanket of silver lust;
I will remain.


Let me reach the depths of your heart;
hidden there for so long,
I shall swim.

My imagination, a burden on my shoulders;
grasp me firmly by the hand,
I crave your touch.

And as you surrender in my arms,
with not even a single doubt,
I will stay...

Oh, my darling! 
What dangerous game we play...




© 2017 Dr YumnaKay



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What an exciting and interesting collaboration. Not sure of the colours ^, perhaps they jolt a little.. but the sentiments are most certainly - warming. Writing about passion so often brings out the very best of thoughts and their underlying imagination/ The use of first person third line somehow cements a fragile devotion.

* Can always add a postscript before or after ..

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

The colours here were used to show the sentiments as well as mine and his favourite colour. His bein.. read more
emmajoy

10 Months Ago

I realised that but...

Was/is a very lovely collaboration..



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it took me awhile to understand the aura of the poem... really it was the stunning one...end was beautiful... keep writing !!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating this collab. I'm glad you liked it :)
Abhishek Asthana

10 Months Ago

you are welcome.. awesome piece it was !!
"Tell me of things you wouldn't say;
and tickle my ears with sin." - The imagery is so vivid it gave me Goosebumps!! Its's like I can feel the warm breath upon my on skin!!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Well, I'm glad you felt the intensity of the words here. Thank you for appreciating this collaborati.. read more
So beautiful!! I love the passion and indulgence you have portrayed. My favorite line is "and tickle my ears with sin".
Delicious devilry! ;) Enjoyed the read.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you liked this collaborative effort. Means a lot to me :)
Excellent. Exciting and urgent with sensuality and poise and class.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you for the appreciation. Glad you liked this collab 😊
I really like this, YunnaKay. Some favorite lines: "...and tickle my esrs with sin...", "As you are part of the ocean waves...", "...my imagination...

Well done!

Lori

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating this collaboration, Lori. Glad you liked it 😊
Lori Brown Boniciolli

10 Months Ago

Very welcome, YunnaKay!
A passion filled write, well done.

The image reminded me of home. Izzy

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it😊
Island Hippy

10 Months Ago

You're welcome
To swim and reach for the heart is a wondrous experience.
Love is indeed a very dangerous game.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

It is indeed. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here, Shabeeh. I appreciate it :)
Interesting write guys.
I like it

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you, JayDee! Glad you liked it. Good to see you around :)
What an exciting and interesting collaboration. Not sure of the colours ^, perhaps they jolt a little.. but the sentiments are most certainly - warming. Writing about passion so often brings out the very best of thoughts and their underlying imagination/ The use of first person third line somehow cements a fragile devotion.

* Can always add a postscript before or after ..

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

The colours here were used to show the sentiments as well as mine and his favourite colour. His bein.. read more
emmajoy

10 Months Ago

I realised that but...

Was/is a very lovely collaboration..
"Danger is my middle name..." ha ha!!! Love this. It's so cute and romantic!
Thank you for sharing!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Anastasia Danger Purvis! 😛 I'm really glad you liked this collab! Means a lot .. read more

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