The Beginning of a New Tomorrow

The Beginning of a New Tomorrow

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

   

 
The world had always clawed at her deepest desires; 
wherein she kept them hidden in her heart
​,​
​​
afraid; that if she voiced them, 
she would be rendered dumb; 
robbed of the power of her voice..
​.​
 
​​
until, it dawned on her; 
to be fearless and rely on her strength.

And she stood facing the shore
​;​
​as a​
 deep calm washed over her
​.​
The beginning of a new tomorrow
​;​
​the
 rising sun glowing in her eyes
​,​
​a​
s she took in the beauty of the world
​.​
She had missed it; among all the chaos
​...​
​now
​she embraces it; a sigh crosses her lips,
as she vows, 
to never let go...​
 


https://soundcloud.com/user-557255780/coffee-with-unverhill-04-18-2017     

Thank you, J Todd Underhill for giving voice to my little piece 😊 



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So profound and beautiful! The image and the words reflect each other...Lyrical form and flow- lovely and original! "The world had always clawed at her deepest desires"...she may have retreated to heal....she recovered and re-entered a better, stronger self..."she vows never to let go"...Love it! Brava!

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely words here, Annette. Truly appreciate it :)
Annette Pisano Higley

5 Months Ago

You are very welcome-Well-deserved words for sure!:)



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I really enjoyed this piece of poetry. thanks for sharing your talents.

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating. Glad you enjoyed 😊
captivative and intelligent writing.
Really a good job

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you. I appreciate your words here :)
So profound and beautiful! The image and the words reflect each other...Lyrical form and flow- lovely and original! "The world had always clawed at her deepest desires"...she may have retreated to heal....she recovered and re-entered a better, stronger self..."she vows never to let go"...Love it! Brava!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely words here, Annette. Truly appreciate it :)
Annette Pisano Higley

5 Months Ago

You are very welcome-Well-deserved words for sure!:)
Aloha YumnaKay, tomorrow is magic because no one is promised tomorrow it's a hope. So to advance fearlessly means honouring every moment. Stunning poem and your image makes me feel homesick. Izzy


Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Your words are more poetic than this poem. Thank you for this beautiful review, Izzy. Glad you liked.. read more
Island Hippy

7 Months Ago

Oh gosh no :) Mahalo I did enjoy it very much.
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

And I enjoyed your review 😊
"The beginning of a new tomorrow​;​
​the rising sun glowing in her eyes​,​
​a​s she took in the beauty of the world​"

Makes me want to believe that the good is there always, you just have to wake up and see it. Wonderfully done. I love the ocean

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

The good is always there, we just need to keep looking.
Thank you, LeeAnne. I'm glad you like.. read more
I love the message of this piece; it calls for strength and for confidence in the face of adversary. A poignant and well penned write to stir the spirits of even the weakest of souls! Great write!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Thank you, Winslow. Glad you liked it. And yes, that is what this piece aimed at 😊
this reminds me of how you put a voice to a sunset through the words you write---your poems are so alive...i am glad i started reading you, and now am able to read you much more often--

this induces a big "sigh"---

j.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Jacob, thank you for your kind words on this piece. I'm humbled at your appreciation...
Learning to go for it is a powerful thing to posses. To put all cares aside and release your inner desires heals.

Nicely written poem here YumnaKay.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

True indeed. Thank you, Relic. Glad you liked it 😊
Very good use of words and thoughts. I liked the struggle leading to positive place.
"She had missed it; among all the chaos​...​
​now
, ​she embraces it; a sigh crosses her lips,
as she vows,
to never let go...​"
I liked the above lines a lot and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry my friend.
Coyote





Posted 7 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Thank you, Coyote. You're always kind in all your appreciation of my works. I'm glad you like it .. read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.
YK! You iz back, I was most worried... What ever would this site be without your smiling... Words...? Face...? Whatever... Strength and inner poise radiate through each syllable drop in the lines... Chaos and abandon... Very well penned...

Posted 7 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

That makes me laugh yet again 😛😛 the Cafe should be prepared for not having me around much in .. read more
Silente

7 Months Ago

I am glad you find my pleasantries humorous... Haha, I am kidding... But seriously, nothing in life .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

That is indeed true. I really happy when a patient returns with a smile 😊

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