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The Beginning of a New Tomorrow

The Beginning of a New Tomorrow

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

   

 
The world had always clawed at her deepest desires; 
wherein she kept them hidden in her heart
​,​
​​
afraid; that if she voiced them, 
she would be rendered dumb; 
robbed of the power of her voice..
​.​
 
​​
until, it dawned on her; 
to be fearless and rely on her strength.

And she stood facing the shore
​;​
​as a​
 deep calm washed over her
​.​
The beginning of a new tomorrow
​;​
​the
 rising sun glowing in her eyes
​,​
​a​
s she took in the beauty of the world
​.​
She had missed it; among all the chaos
​...​
​now
​she embraces it; a sigh crosses her lips,
as she vows, 
to never let go...​
 


https://soundcloud.com/user-557255780/coffee-with-unverhill-04-18-2017     

Thank you, J Todd Underhill for giving voice to my little piece 😊 



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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So profound and beautiful! The image and the words reflect each other...Lyrical form and flow- lovely and original! "The world had always clawed at her deepest desires"...she may have retreated to heal....she recovered and re-entered a better, stronger self..."she vows never to let go"...Love it! Brava!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely words here, Annette. Truly appreciate it :)
Annette Pisano Higley

4 Months Ago

You are very welcome-Well-deserved words for sure!:)



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You left me breathless from the deep touches all inside my heart, I never saw or read anything more beautiful or romantic than this poem or its picture, it thrilled me and made me want to find a guy to love like you do yours and never let him go. The color of your words and making them all on the right side gives this a very special meaning too, I wish I could write like this you must have had a good teacher or you are naturally talented -- thank you YumnaKay. :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MaryKC

5 Months Ago

This stirs up a beautiful imagery for me. It is absolutely beautiful, for me this could be the tale .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Mary. You summed that up very nicely. I appreciate your thoughts on this 😊
MaryKC

5 Months Ago

Your welcome!
Quite extraordinary. This is gossamer and romantic yet truthful and brave all at the same time. And that is quite an accomplishment.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating, Ken. Your words mean a lot to me 😊
A new day, a new beginning for every sad story always does...
The way you conveyed it, I liked it...:)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

True..there is.. thank you, Surya. Glad you liked it :)
Beautiful ! Loved it! A new day,a new chance for a positive attitude! It's refreshing to read this!
Thank you for sharing Yumna :)!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

I'm glad you found this refreshing. Thank you for liking :)
zaisham9393

6 Months Ago

You are welcome :)!

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Dr. YumnaKay
Dr. YumnaKay

Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



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