Winter Thoughts

Winter Thoughts

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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In Collaboration with Kesha...

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Winter Thoughts
The snow cascaded in front of her,
​f​
lakes landing on her lips,
​h​
er thoughts instantly went to him
​,​
​a​
nd that time he left her outside.

​Leaving, in that smokey aura
where winter leaves surrounded her.
Burying herself in a castle of emotions;
and there she sealed her heart​.


Turning the lock and throwing the key,
determined to leave her shattered mind behind.
Dancing with the snowflakes,
​s​
he disappeared into the night.

The night clouds enshrouded her very soul;
she questioned the mere thought 
of existing without him
​,​
 
as she came by the paths they'd crossed together, 
​wrapping​
 herself in the blanket of his warm thoughts
​.​
 

Her breathing became shallow,
a​
nd her thoughts were dark
​.​
Now wondering where it was he went to,
and why he 
​left​
 without ever saying good-bye.

​And in that moment she realized.
They'd never been one; but two separate beings,
and she was deluded into believing
that they were destined to be one...

She was unwilling to admit defeat,
however hurt that he ran with her heart,
with her head held high,
​ ​
and the moon as her guide,
​s​
he 
knew​​
 she 
would​
 be alright. 

Embracing these winter thoughts,
the night now smiled down at her
​;
 
​her nostalgia washed away​.

everything fell back to place; a blissful oblivion...​




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Seems this collaboration is both an emotional healing and learning experience; phrased almost perfectly as the one writer melts into the other's thoughts. When one learns from hurt, time lessens the scar.. and, life goes on. Perhaps.

Fine work, Kesha and Yumna.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you, Emma, for your appreciation of this collab and for your thoughtful words here. Glad you l.. read more
Kesha

6 Months Ago

Thank you very much Emma! :)



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I like this very much. Thank you. Reminded me of my nostalgia.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you for liking this collab. Appreciate your words here :)
Omg this makes me wish it was winter! I miss the snow! This poem is truly beautiful, Yumna! The way you write has changed and I'm happy that we on WC can be here and see you change and evolve into a great writer

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Well, I am glad I changed and it was WC who made me this way and friends like you 😊
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An emotional and wonderful poem... Very well penned the nostalgia... beautiful work of you and Kesha

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating this collab too. 😊
Priyanshi

6 Months Ago

You're welcome, Yumna.
This one is so nice. Both of you did well in pouring out the emotion this poem needed. The chosen words are also connected to each other from first to last. Well done. :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you, C! Glad you liked it :)
Collabs can be dodgy. But you both did this well. So well you wouldn't know who wrote what. Well done.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Well, that's a nice compliment for both of us. 😊
Thank you, Paul. Glad you liked it.
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Kesha

6 Months Ago

Thank you that's awesome! I'm glad you liked it!
They'd never been one but two separate beings, and she was deluded into believing that they were destined to be one. I truly liked this line. This was very nicely written. I truly liked it.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kesha

6 Months Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you, Najam. Glad you liked it 😊
Najam Us Saher

6 Months Ago

You're welcome ☺
This is the collaboration Ive been waiting to read, its beautiful, I wonder who this guy is

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Hahah no one! Lol you're always wondering that 😛
Thank you for liking this collab, J. Mea.. read more
Kesha

6 Months Ago

Like Yumna stated, it's based on nobody haha, I was showing her how to write a poem that tells a sto.. read more
*makes a poem about winter in the summer*
Hahaha I'm just kidding.
I really loved it, you used beautiful words, and you described things very good.
Beautiful! :D

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Hahah well, it was snowing the day Kesha planned it at her place so that was it 😛
Thank y.. read more
Kesha

6 Months Ago

Haha yes it was 😂 thank you!
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BBP
Beautiful write! I like how the winter washed away her pain and renewed her.

Nice twist on healing! :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you. I think winter is the best time for that 😊
I'm glad you liked this collab 😊
Kesha

6 Months Ago

Thank you! :)
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mou
yes right...if the dark intense emotion is needed to be magnified then winter is the only best season..silence everywhere but except within the heart and memory..we thought that something can be bound by our most sincere love and care but faith smiles and teach that we are just a toy of it where playing object is just emotion..very touching and wonderful write...

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you for this thoughtful review and for liking this collaborative effort, mou. Truly appreciate.. read more
Kesha

6 Months Ago

Thank you for the lovely review :)

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