Winter Thoughts

Winter Thoughts

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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In Collaboration with Kesha...

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Winter Thoughts
The snow cascaded in front of her,
​f​
lakes landing on her lips,
​h​
er thoughts instantly went to him
​,​
​a​
nd that time he left her outside.

​Leaving, in that smokey aura
where winter leaves surrounded her.
Burying herself in a castle of emotions;
and there she sealed her heart​.


Turning the lock and throwing the key,
determined to leave her shattered mind behind.
Dancing with the snowflakes,
​s​
he disappeared into the night.

The night clouds enshrouded her very soul;
she questioned the mere thought 
of existing without him
​,​
 
as she came by the paths they'd crossed together, 
​wrapping​
 herself in the blanket of his warm thoughts
​.​
 

Her breathing became shallow,
a​
nd her thoughts were dark
​.​
Now wondering where it was he went to,
and why he 
​left​
 without ever saying good-bye.

​And in that moment she realized.
They'd never been one; but two separate beings,
and she was deluded into believing
that they were destined to be one...

She was unwilling to admit defeat,
however hurt that he ran with her heart,
with her head held high,
​ ​
and the moon as her guide,
​s​
he 
knew​​
 she 
would​
 be alright. 

Embracing these winter thoughts,
the night now smiled down at her
​;
 
​her nostalgia washed away​.

everything fell back to place; a blissful oblivion...​




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Seems this collaboration is both an emotional healing and learning experience; phrased almost perfectly as the one writer melts into the other's thoughts. When one learns from hurt, time lessens the scar.. and, life goes on. Perhaps.

Fine work, Kesha and Yumna.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Thank you, Emma, for your appreciation of this collab and for your thoughtful words here. Glad you l.. read more
Kesha

7 Months Ago

Thank you very much Emma! :)



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This poem has a really nice essence to it. I loved the imagery
Especially when you said
​"f​lakes landing on her lips,
​h​er thoughts instantly went to him​,​
​a​nd that time he left her outside"
Thats a really good symbolism of his relationship with her in my opinion which was cold and unwelcoming
Great job!!!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kesha

7 Months Ago

Thank you very much! Happy you liked it :)
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Thank you, Pia Farooq. Glad you liked this collab 😊
Wow! This is amazingly expressed and written! The imagery the story itself elegantly written into a poem! The winter cold compared to hearts in the undertones. You have awesome talent! I love the head held high at the end. The mind process reads so smoothly like the words just spilled out on to the paper without effort.
Well penned! I just love this piece!!
Tabby

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Thank you, Tabby. Really glad you liked this collaborative effort 😊
Tabby Mac

7 Months Ago

Well done both of you!!
Kesha

7 Months Ago

Thank you! Happy you liked it :)
" ​her nostalgia washed away​.
everything fell back to place; a blissful oblivion...​​"
Beautiful, elegant and well done poem guys!
So many thoughts and emotions and lots of creativity and even the title... Winter thoughts, it was great as well!
Great collaboration piece Yumna and Kesha :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kesha

7 Months Ago

Lmao you're so nice Yumna 😂😂
Mr.Writer

7 Months Ago

Yep, she's very nice ;) xD
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

hahah you guys are outdoing me in jokes lol :P
I love this piece very much! Thank you for writing with me, I had fun :) Hope you enjoyed writing this as well :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kesha

7 Months Ago

No, lol you dork, I'm saying you were able to practice your storytelling by writing this piece with .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Yeah I am a dork hahah 😉😂
Thank you! That's great coming from you 😘😊
Kesha

7 Months Ago

Haha yes you are :P
And you're welcome :D

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