Search me...

Search me...

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental writing...

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Search me...


Search me...

and you may find me 

embedded in between your lips

as I take in the taste of you;

devouring ~ you are.

 

Search me...

in those lonely nights

when I walked, following a shadow

that turned out to be yours;

mesmerizing ~ you are.

 

Search me...

as you drift towards sleep

and I'll wake up 

resting on your eyelids;

intoxicating ~ you are.




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Nice experiment, Yumna Dear! : )
Beautifully suggestive first verse to warm the imagination just right; then, verse two kept imploring that we "search" you … there's a thought in itself worth entertaining … LOL!
Verse three implores again as the crescendo soothes to a soothing climax.
I loved how you wrapped-up each verse with a titillating descriptive of your lover … those three words engender a visually appealing poem in themselves.
I especially enjoy it when you let your pen take the reins of your amazing imagination … the picture adds a soft ambience to the feel, too!

I've missed your poetry! ⁓ Richard : )

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Richard. I'm grateful to you for bringing out whatever little poetic voice I do have :)read more
Richard

5 Months Ago

And, You mean a lot to me! : )


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Nice experiment, Yumna Dear! : )
Beautifully suggestive first verse to warm the imagination just right; then, verse two kept imploring that we "search" you … there's a thought in itself worth entertaining … LOL!
Verse three implores again as the crescendo soothes to a soothing climax.
I loved how you wrapped-up each verse with a titillating descriptive of your lover … those three words engender a visually appealing poem in themselves.
I especially enjoy it when you let your pen take the reins of your amazing imagination … the picture adds a soft ambience to the feel, too!

I've missed your poetry! ⁓ Richard : )

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Richard. I'm grateful to you for bringing out whatever little poetic voice I do have :)read more
Richard

5 Months Ago

And, You mean a lot to me! : )
Loved the middle very beautiful

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you like it :)
And so, who is the brave adventurer to set foot in such depth of a forest? Perhaps she will find a self projection, perhaps another?

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Perhaps is the word alright ;)
I think we all are adventurers ... thank you for reading this .. read more
i love the repetition of "you are" it adds intensity

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you like it :)
Drifting, romantic and slightly melancholic. Like soft mist. Almost a forbidden pleasure.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your words here, Ken. Truly appreciate it :)
What powerful those three words are – and – how they elevate this poetic gem to great heights of reading; Devouring (eats food or prey hungrily or quickly), Mesmerizing (capture the complete attention) & Intoxicating (liable to cause someone to lose control of their faculties or behaviour). Hummmmm…

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you for this interesting review, Phill. Truly appreciate it :))
Wow.
So much axillarating.
So much imperatives in this poem to the beloved.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating :)
Rubein Geterminah

6 Months Ago

You welcome
Beautiful use of words dear dear. Your words demanding and wonderful. You create a masterpiece for trying to find proper places and needs. To be intoxicating by another. Perfect place to know. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your words here, Coyote. Truly appreciate it 😊
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Poet.
This has a very tantalizing note, sort of a hide and seek play of words and sensations. Lovely done dear Yumna :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

I like your interpretation of this piece. Thank you for liking, Ana. Always appreciate your words .. read more
Ana B.

6 Months Ago

Anytime sweet Yumna :)
This is both romantic and creepy as I feel a stalker vibe, but it was very well written especially while reusing the same phrase 'search me'

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alice Maria

6 Months Ago

You're welcome. If you have the time, can you please review some of my work?
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Of course. I'll get around to it 😊
Alice Maria

6 Months Ago

Thankyou so much

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Experimental Poetry


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