Search me...

Experimental writing...

Search me...

Search me...

and you may find me 

embedded in between your lips

​a​s I take in the taste of you;

devouring ~​ you are.

 

Search me...

in those lonely nights

​when I walked, following a shadow

​that turned out to be yours;

mesmerizing ~ you are.

 

Search me...

as you drift towards sleep

and I'll wake up 

resting on your eyelids;

intoxicating ~ you are.

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Nice experiment, Yumna Dear! : )
Beautifully suggestive first verse to warm the imagination just right; then, verse two kept imploring that we "search" you … there's a thought in itself worth entertaining … LOL!
Verse three implores again as the crescendo soothes to a soothing climax.
I loved how you wrapped-up each verse with a titillating descriptive of your lover … those three words engender a visually appealing poem in themselves.
I especially enjoy it when you let your pen take the reins of your amazing imagination … the picture adds a soft ambience to the feel, too!

I've missed your poetry! ⁓ Richard : )

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Richard. I'm grateful to you for bringing out whatever little poetic voice I do have :)read moreThank you, Richard. I'm grateful to you for bringing out whatever little poetic voice I do have :)
Your appreciation means a lot to me 😊

[Richard🖌]

And, You mean a lot to me! : )

[Sinbulvinter]

I saw the thumbnail photo and it really caught my eye! That's neat af.
This is beautiful and somewhat creepy for some reason all at the same time. I actually really like this! Your choice of words are so fitting!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

At your mentioning creepy, I read it again and it does sound like it lol kinda like the vampire feel 😛😛
Thank you for liking this piece, Nerissa. Truly appreciate it 😊

[Sinbulvinter]

I was thinking more stalker feel, but vampire too. haha.
You're welcome!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah then it's a romantic stalker 😂😛

[Sinbulvinter]

Yeah, man. I don't know, maybe I'm just messed up in the head and look at everything darkly, but it did seem like a romantic stalker type of vibe haha

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Lol no that's an interesting thing 😉 if only a stalker exists who is romantic too 😂😂

[Sinbulvinter]

Stalkers are kinda romantic... Until they start leaving dead birds on your porch. XP

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Lmao haven't met any 😛😛

[Sinbulvinter]

I've met a few... Been one myself. haha

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Lol really? Now that sounds creepy haha 😂😛

[Sinbulvinter]

Yep, had a restraining order against me and everything

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ahemm builds up my curiosity 😉😛

[Chase Dylan]

Search me and you may find sleepless alleys, mesmerizing oddities... Embedded betwixt lips, lonely nights and forlorn shadows... A succinct and drifting write about the devouring nature of "me"... Intoxicatingly penned...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Silente. I appreciate your words here :)

[Chase Dylan]

My pleasure

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Reads like an enchanting dreamscape. Weaving soft , beckoning tendrils around the reader..."and I'll wake up..resting on your eyelids" -Magical and Perfect!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Annette. Truly appreciate your words on my piece :)

[duff]

There is a subtle intensity throughout that keeps the reader curious of what's next. A level of intrigue that holds steady. You want to keep reading. You're hooked until the end which is always a good thing. Great job

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)

[duff]

You're welcome and definitely did!

[The earth (Titan maphah..]

have nothing to say...brilliantly penned

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating :)

[NAHTEWOHARD]

Very song-like. I can't quite find the deeper meaning here, but I certainly love how this poem is constructed and how it is executed. I wonder who the "you" is...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you. Glad you like it 😊

[Tony Jordan]

A spectacular wee ditty Yumna.
Beautiful emotions flow throughout.
:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Tony. You know I always appreciate your words 😊😊

[Surya]

haha, Well u laid your bricks well and now I can see a colorful wall here...I loved it..:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's a nice way of saying that. Thank you for appreciating, Surya. Glad you liked it 😊

[Tabby Mac]

This is hands down perfect! I love everything about it! EVERYTHING!!!
Tabby

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much, Tabby. Your warm comments really made my day! So glad you liked it 😊

[Farhan Shaikh]

Wowiee yumna such a lovely piece of work, i really enjoyed it. Wonderful

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Farhan. Glad you liked it 😊