Search me...

Search me...

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental writing...

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Search me...


Search me...

and you may find me 

embedded in between your lips

as I take in the taste of you;

devouring ~ you are.

 

Search me...

in those lonely nights

when I walked, following a shadow

that turned out to be yours;

mesmerizing ~ you are.

 

Search me...

as you drift towards sleep

and I'll wake up 

resting on your eyelids;

intoxicating ~ you are.




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Nice experiment, Yumna Dear! : )
Beautifully suggestive first verse to warm the imagination just right; then, verse two kept imploring that we "search" you … there's a thought in itself worth entertaining … LOL!
Verse three implores again as the crescendo soothes to a soothing climax.
I loved how you wrapped-up each verse with a titillating descriptive of your lover … those three words engender a visually appealing poem in themselves.
I especially enjoy it when you let your pen take the reins of your amazing imagination … the picture adds a soft ambience to the feel, too!

I've missed your poetry! ⁓ Richard : )

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Thank you, Richard. I'm grateful to you for bringing out whatever little poetic voice I do have :)read more
Richard

4 Months Ago

And, You mean a lot to me! : )



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I saw the thumbnail photo and it really caught my eye! That's neat af.
This is beautiful and somewhat creepy for some reason all at the same time. I actually really like this! Your choice of words are so fitting!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Lol really? Now that sounds creepy haha 😂😛
Sinbulvinter

5 Months Ago

Yep, had a restraining order against me and everything
Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Ahemm builds up my curiosity 😉😛
Search me and you may find sleepless alleys, mesmerizing oddities... Embedded betwixt lips, lonely nights and forlorn shadows... A succinct and drifting write about the devouring nature of "me"... Intoxicatingly penned...

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Silente. I appreciate your words here :)
Silente

5 Months Ago

My pleasure
Reads like an enchanting dreamscape. Weaving soft , beckoning tendrils around the reader..."and I'll wake up..resting on your eyelids" -Magical and Perfect!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Annette. Truly appreciate your words on my piece :)
There is a subtle intensity throughout that keeps the reader curious of what's next. A level of intrigue that holds steady. You want to keep reading. You're hooked until the end which is always a good thing. Great job

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)
duff

5 Months Ago

You're welcome and definitely did!
have nothing to say...brilliantly penned

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating :)
Very song-like. I can't quite find the deeper meaning here, but I certainly love how this poem is constructed and how it is executed. I wonder who the "you" is...

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you. Glad you like it 😊
A spectacular wee ditty Yumna.
Beautiful emotions flow throughout.
:)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Tony. You know I always appreciate your words 😊😊
haha, Well u laid your bricks well and now I can see a colorful wall here...I loved it..:)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

That's a nice way of saying that. Thank you for appreciating, Surya. Glad you liked it 😊
This is hands down perfect! I love everything about it! EVERYTHING!!!
Tabby

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Tabby. Your warm comments really made my day! So glad you liked it 😊
Wowiee yumna such a lovely piece of work, i really enjoyed it. Wonderful

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Farhan. Glad you liked it 😊

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Experimental Poetry


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Dr. YumnaKay
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Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



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