A Fountain of Love

A Fountain of Love

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Random scribbles. Experimenting with creating images...

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Erupting horizons ... dreams 

rainbow colours ... engulfed


merged in your colours ~ my life.


Scattered thoughts ... submerged,

in oceanic depths --- now emerges

 

~ a fountain of love. 




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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I felt the start was like the visual metaphors that movies employ to convey 'la petite mort' (champange bottle popping and foam over-flowing anyone?) but the depth of the form increased aptly, with the depth of the sea. I saw thermal vents of words spewing forth and supporting life from the cold recesses of the ocean.
If this was an exercise in creating images then you did it well Yumna. :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Hahah he'd most probably go insane if he started watching the live feed here 😂😛 even I stopped.. read more
Tony Jordan

6 Months Ago

haha - so 'You dont have to be mad to be on WC but it helps' is the truth...lmao

Leav.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Your epic quotes are increasing by the day - or you just started opening up finally lol 😛
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more of an eruption as tsunami hits the land. and what power it brings

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Aye, and how powerfully it hits to take away the senses too...
thank you for reading this one.. read more
So few words, yet so much beauty... Your talent never ceases to amaze me. :) Julie

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

I'm truly humbled by your words. Thank you for liking 😊
MsJewel

6 Months Ago

My pleasure
Nice imagery....very romantic. Lydi**

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you. Truly appreciate your words 😊
I am not so sure why I love this one~

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you. Glad you do 😊
Tony Jordan

6 Months Ago

heheh - watch out Yumna...
:)
Woahhhh! You write so deep and meaningful :)


Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you, Sonakshi. Truly appreciate your words here :)
I just adore this so much.
It's a beautiful example of a free flow with scattered thoughts with one purpose.
Thank you for sharing

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you for liking this one, Anastasia. Truly appreciate your words 😊
I felt the start was like the visual metaphors that movies employ to convey 'la petite mort' (champange bottle popping and foam over-flowing anyone?) but the depth of the form increased aptly, with the depth of the sea. I saw thermal vents of words spewing forth and supporting life from the cold recesses of the ocean.
If this was an exercise in creating images then you did it well Yumna. :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Hahah he'd most probably go insane if he started watching the live feed here 😂😛 even I stopped.. read more
Tony Jordan

6 Months Ago

haha - so 'You dont have to be mad to be on WC but it helps' is the truth...lmao

Leav.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Your epic quotes are increasing by the day - or you just started opening up finally lol 😛
.. read more
"In oceanic depths now emerges - a fountain of love."

Equating the ocean to depths really compounds the emotive feeling this gives your reader. Its brevity makes it shine!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you, Kelly. Truly appreciate your words here 😊😊
Amazing. There is so much depth in your every sentence. I really liked this.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you, Najam. Glad you felt the depth here :)
Najam Us Saher

6 Months Ago

Oh yeah I did 😁 You're welcome.
A wonderfully written piece :) short and sweet so to say ;)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you, Kesha. Appreciate your words here :))
Kesha

6 Months Ago

You're welcome :)

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