An Unrequited Love

An Unrequited Love

A Chapter by Closed
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Experimenting yet again, more of a challenge by TJ... totally random.

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Fiery notes ... glorifying passion

electric stares ... moments of heat

 

captured emotions ~ in essence

 

hopes cupped --- in trembling hands,

vibrating momentarily ... stilled 

 

~ an unrequited love ~




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Short, sad and to the point, I really liked this. I enjoyed this line:

hopes cupped --- in trembling hands

The trembling hands really painted the picture. Wonderfully written!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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7 Months Ago

Thank you, Kesha. This was actually a challenge Tony gave me to write on 'unrequited love' lol now r.. read more
Kesha

7 Months Ago

You're welcome and haha yeah it does seem like a premonition
Tony, Tony, Tony... What a succinct beast of a challenge, and Yumna... Well what can I say... My minds eye vibrated sublime... The essence of passion is electric, and cupped within the cadence of hopeful essence... Nicely penned...

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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7 Months Ago

Thank you, Silente! I enjoyed your review and truly appreciate your words here 😊
Silente

7 Months Ago

Most welcome, I enjoyed the experimental writing even more than you enjoyed my words over the experi.. read more
Simply beautiful! :) Julie

Posted 7 Months Ago


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7 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating, Julie 😊
you certainly captured the fragile hopefulness and the dire realisation of the term in a impartial but sympathetic way here Yumna...go to the top of the class !

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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8 Months Ago

Lol I had to write something 'cause you gave the challenge 😉😛
Thank you, Tony. Glad it.. read more
You have aced the challenge, Yumna!
Short & Sweet poem.
Keep writing:)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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8 Months Ago

Thank you, Naat.
Of course, I will 😛😊
Neetha

8 Months Ago

Glad to know:)
For a challenge and experiment,that is indeed what it is like. Excellent, thoughtful write.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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8 Months Ago

Thank you, Ken. Glad you appreciate of this experiment. :)
Wow! You've whipped up another fascinating experiment Yumna!
I can feel the emotions passing out in this poem of shocking love!
Keep it up Yummy Yumna!

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Mr.Writer

8 Months Ago

Couldn't think of any other :P
Closed

8 Months Ago

Lol well I'll think about it 😛 but I can't guarantee if I'll write well on it 😶
Mr.Writer

8 Months Ago

Oh, no problem :)

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