Rejection

Rejection

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental yet again...

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Fresh tears roll 
​from​
 my eyes
​,​
​the
 salty taste bitter on my lips
​,​
​t​
he reason of them 
​~​
 you
​.​

Shattered I am
​ ---
 like tiny shards of glass
​.​

​M​
heart ~​​ 
crumbling within
​,​
  
the 
​'​
whys
​'​
 piercing
​ ​
my soul
​,​
clawing deep inside

~ this feeling of rejection ~



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Rejection.

Many of us have been there, others are lucky and may never taste the bitterness and heartache of it all.

What you have done her is capture the gutwrenching feeling with few words. I'll always come back to your work, not because I find your messages easy to understand, but your words which you use in these type of pieces are always seemingly perfect for the content of the piece.

Always a fan.

Mark.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

matrixmark

3 Months Ago

But it wouldnt be the same if I started doing poems.
You CAN write, I certainly CAN'T do any.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Lmaoo! Well at least you can rhyme 😛😉😂
matrixmark

3 Months Ago

That's my best. I thought it was funny, made me giggle a bit too.

Mark.



Reviews

Rejection.

Many of us have been there, others are lucky and may never taste the bitterness and heartache of it all.

What you have done her is capture the gutwrenching feeling with few words. I'll always come back to your work, not because I find your messages easy to understand, but your words which you use in these type of pieces are always seemingly perfect for the content of the piece.

Always a fan.

Mark.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

matrixmark

3 Months Ago

But it wouldnt be the same if I started doing poems.
You CAN write, I certainly CAN'T do any.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Lmaoo! Well at least you can rhyme 😛😉😂
matrixmark

3 Months Ago

That's my best. I thought it was funny, made me giggle a bit too.

Mark.
i love this so much, it's so relatable

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating :)
Perfect. Intriguing and very emotional indeed.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating 😊
Maria

5 Months Ago

Your most welcomed.
i love this..i really love this...great work dear!..keep going and i could relate to this as well!...my favourite line was...''this feeling of rejection''....keep writing and keep sharing!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you for liking. And of course I'll keep on writing lol :P
Ok... Now I am reading everything backwards... Either I am convinced ALL poems work backwards... Or this DOES work the other way, as well... Amazing... Rejection is... I do not even have a clever review... I am just so confounded by the backwards perspective... Haha

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

5 Months Ago

I blame you unequivocally...
Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

I should be blaming someone too since it was someone from around here who pointed that out to me lol.. read more
Silente

5 Months Ago

We blame them neurotically, then... Lol
Ugh this was so heartwrenching to read, you can really feel the sadness in this piece, I liked the style of this however. Nicely written dear friend

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

It was kinda sad to write too 'cause I usually don't write this way..
Thank you for feeling t.. read more
Kesha

6 Months Ago

I bet /: and you're welcome!
Very imaginative it is....I can imagine it very well...feeling of rejection is the worst,it shatters one completely....and i could feel it ,while reading this poem....one of your good work , Yumna.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you, Priyanshi. Appreciate your review.
Priyanshi

6 Months Ago

My pleasure .
Writing is the remedy to tough feelings - I can almost feel the bitterness flooding across the screen! Nice one Yumna!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

It is indeed. Thank you for feeling this write and for your words.
There's a somehow wisdom in this.. or maybe a inherent strength in spite of what you're saying.
You know the pain - ' ​the salty taste bitter on my lips​,​ ' you're dealing with it... as both experimental poet abut true human being. Fine, fine writing, Yumna.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Ah yes, I did for a while... Thank you for your kind words here, Em. Truly appreciate it.
Felt sad as I was reading this. I hope that this is just a poem and not how you really feel.
I feel like you could make this piece a bit longer, I would enjoy reading a bit more. Your words flow so lovely and elegant.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

I wish I could make it longer too but like always words fail me. Thank you for liking, Gullia.

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