Rejection

Rejection

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
"

Experimental yet again...

"
Fresh tears roll 
​from​
 my eyes
​,​
​the
 salty taste bitter on my lips
​,​
​t​
he reason of them 
​~​
 you
​.​

Shattered I am
​ ---
 like tiny shards of glass
​.​

​M​
heart ~​​ 
crumbling within
​,​
  
the 
​'​
whys
​'​
 piercing
​ ​
my soul
​,​
clawing deep inside

~ this feeling of rejection ~



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Rejection.

Many of us have been there, others are lucky and may never taste the bitterness and heartache of it all.

What you have done her is capture the gutwrenching feeling with few words. I'll always come back to your work, not because I find your messages easy to understand, but your words which you use in these type of pieces are always seemingly perfect for the content of the piece.

Always a fan.

Mark.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

matrixmark

1 Year Ago

But it wouldnt be the same if I started doing poems.
You CAN write, I certainly CAN'T do any.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Lmaoo! Well at least you can rhyme 😛😉😂
matrixmark

1 Year Ago

That's my best. I thought it was funny, made me giggle a bit too.

Mark.



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a thick handkerchief isn't enough to soak up the sadness oozing from this one.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your words here, Jacob.
Its a common feeling what everyone get when they are rejected. Nice one.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Indeed.
Thank you for liking :)
Feeling of rejection grows stronger with time...I really liked this one.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I would say one can overcome that feeling with time..
Thank you for liking :)
Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

It would take so much courage and blessings to do so. You are most welcome ☺
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ahh yes, if one is strong then it's easy I guess...
The stark, dark beauty of melancholy. Rejection is one of those things that never gets easier.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yes, it isn't. Thank you for your words here, Ken.
The flow is good, the meaning clear and beautifully written, and the emotion is heart rendering. Well done, love.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading and liking. Truly appreciate your words here 😊
Being rejected by someone you care about really does create a sharp physical pain for me. I think it's interesting to just look at this one little slice of life with a magnifying glass. When you put "experimental" to describe your poems, it reminds me of Coyote John putting "just words" . . . maybe you should make this your permanent byline! *wink! wink!* Good sensory details to show taste & physicality of psychic pain.

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

That's an interesting idea! Maybe I should make it my tagline 😉😊

Thank you for.. read more
barleygirl

1 Year Ago

"experimental etchings of emotion" (OK, maybe too much alliteration?) *wink! wink!*
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Haha no 😛 that's what it is kind of... I seem to get too emotional in writing than I actually am .. read more

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