A Long Lost Dream

A Long Lost Dream

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental. Totally random.

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His skin ... a landscape,

upon which I doodled

shapes, memories, fantasies

 

drawings on an empty canvas.

 

My fingers ... splayed; 

vibrant colours ... brushes of ecstasy

refreshed, reawakened, revived

 ~ A long lost dream ~ 






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Short but sensuous and rich in meaning. Excellent.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Ken. Truly appreciate your words here :)
So short and simple poem, I loved it, friend...a beautiful dream full of memories, fantasies...
"My fingers ... splayed;
vibrant colours ... brushes of ecstasy..."......loved these lines, Yumna.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Priyanshi. Glad you like it 😊
Priyanshi

5 Months Ago

My pleasure.
A beautiful dream you have painted upon his skin and have shared with us through this writing. A deeply meaningful piece stated with few words. Beautifully writ YumnaKay. Angelheart

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Angelheart. I appreciate your words here 😊
Angelheart1

5 Months Ago

My pleasure.
Very drastic and lovely piece Yumna! Quite refreshing and engaging as well! :)
Keep it up

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Shaan. Glad you liked it 😊
Almost wondering where you got "refreshed" from... Seems like a purposeful switch-up... An interesting thought... Finger-painting on skin... Do we use fire or paint...The three R's make a strong, boldly linear statement... Dreamily penned...

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Silente

5 Months Ago

Well then... Keep at it, cause I enjoy this style... Although I still sometimes question rhyme meter.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Yeah I knew someone would gonna say that 😛 I've actually neglected that meter thing for days now .. read more
Silente

5 Months Ago

Haha, oh boy... Well... Better clean that up, or else... Or else...
Perhaps dream come true? Such beautifully laid words, Yumna. This new styel really lies 'longside your thoughts.

There's something about blank canvasses that call for visuals!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

5 Months Ago

Perhaps, even more so, we need gently reach and spar for those dreams to come true.. (note, i didn'.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Hmm I believe fate does have a hand in it....
emmajoy

5 Months Ago

Everything has a hand in it... that's why everything exists!
I really like this new style that you have adopted.. quite jealous really. A wonderful piece! Nicely penned I loved it :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Hahah Kesha 😛 this new style is kinda a short cut really lol it helps me write off mere words tha.. read more
Kesha

5 Months Ago

Haha well that's even cooler :P and you're welcome :)
Man this is ice... I like this...

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you, glad you like it :)
oooo relate to this right now---interactions with an ex----positive...maybe some dreams just go away for awhile....but return.
beautiful expression here.

j.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

They do, sometimes... Thank you, Jacob, for your kind words here. Truly appreciate it :)

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