My Heart Sings

My Heart Sings

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental... trying to write something happy... don't know if it worked :P

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~ my heart sings ~

 

a beautiful melody, unheard of, until now, a foreign language,

 

 the sound of it like a chime falling onto my up til wandering ears

 


trickling water, scent of the first summer rain ...


 

 a deep breath, my nostrils filled with the cooling air that surrounds me,

 

the musical notes opening their arms wide ~ embracing ... and I give in ---

 

~ my heart sings ~




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Hands down my favorite poem today. It's beautiful and so cozy to read. Perfect start on my day :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Ah, I'm glad you find it beautiful! :)
Thank you, Gullia.
You succeeded, my face aches with smiles. Beautiful phrasing, musically descriptive. You've created a work of art to match the illustration! Well done indeed. I exit, my heart singing too.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Em. Glad that I could make you smile 😊
Your appreciation means a lot to me :)
emmajoy

5 Months Ago

You're very welcome, as always.
Delightful poem and whimsically happy image. Lyrical and joyful. Lovely sensual enjoyment of- well- enjoyment! Breath of fresh air and brought a smile. Thank you!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you for this lovely review! I'm glad you like it 😊
this worked....but made me realize that "happy"
seems a foreign language for my pen....

we write sad so much more easily, don't we?

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

So very true. I think we writers dwell more on sadness than reasoning with being happy... Thank you .. read more
A great piece with wonderful imagery, I quite enjoyed this piece, very cheerful! Complete opposite of the one I'm working on lol

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

haha well I thought it was time I changed into something positive ;p Glad you like it. Thank you :)
Kesha

5 Months Ago

Haha it's a good change ;p and you're welcome!
Oh yes..it worked. Absolutely beautiful! :) Julie

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you. I'm glad it did 😊
There is a very positive vibe in the poem.Loved it!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you felt the positive vibes here 😊
This is how a positive and happy poem looks like... 😀
I really liked the way there was no cause mentioned for a person's happiness but the person was just happy for no reason..that's a nice message...I really liked it...

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

I think it's better to try being happy for no reasons than to search for one 😉
Thank you... read more
Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

Exactly....You brought a smile on my face... I thank you for that
You are most welcome... :)
Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Then you're the first person I brought a smile to today haha 😛 I'm glad of that 😊😇
Imagery worked here along with emotions....they are different emotions makes one feel happy and to smile unconsciously.....I enjoyed it....:)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Surya. I'm glad I was able to convey both :)

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