Meaningless

Meaningless

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental write. Inspired.

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How meaning
less
the words you speak
 
that roll off your tongue
into nothing
nes
​​
s
 
​a​
nd beyond ...
​o​
nto my skin
paper thin, dry tones
​;
I seek 
​~
the deeper meaning
with
in.




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I almost missed how well this was put together... Kinda distracted by the presentation style... Absolute gem...I would almost pull it all back together so the reader can fully appreciate the skillful meter... Regardless of style choice, it is void of filler that would otherwise mar a wonderfully blank show of apathy... Bravo

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

11 Months Ago

Oh, no, gosh... Do not re-write it... I meant solid criticism as in like... More than saying... "oh .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

oh my, you got me confused now... in the real world your criticism matters more than mine, that's fo.. read more
Silente

11 Months Ago

I have confused myself... Lol.. Just do not re-write anything on my account! Just think of it for ne.. read more



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my Da use to tell me to let hurtful words roll off "like water off a ducks back" :) i really appreciate the turn and closing in this ..we are very very powerful within .. if we hold to truth ... i will try to keep this one with me today as i go about my little business .. nice one Yumna!
E.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

ahahahaha Onion head ... i do too ..and so blessed to have love for me Da :) and me Ma ...
Tony Jordan

11 Months Ago

Me granny and me granda too
:))
Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

yes indeed :))))
I almost missed how well this was put together... Kinda distracted by the presentation style... Absolute gem...I would almost pull it all back together so the reader can fully appreciate the skillful meter... Regardless of style choice, it is void of filler that would otherwise mar a wonderfully blank show of apathy... Bravo

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

11 Months Ago

Oh, no, gosh... Do not re-write it... I meant solid criticism as in like... More than saying... "oh .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

oh my, you got me confused now... in the real world your criticism matters more than mine, that's fo.. read more
Silente

11 Months Ago

I have confused myself... Lol.. Just do not re-write anything on my account! Just think of it for ne.. read more
Short and powerful! Just what I like :) What I also really like is the way you write. It's like there's a new Yumna and you're not afraid to try something new :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much, Gullia :) your appreciation means a lot to me!
I really liked this, short & simple but straightforward... like saying I don't care what you say, my mind is set.. I also liked the format of this one.. quite different

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Aye, an interesting interpretation. Thank you for your kind words here, Kesha. Glad you like it :)
Kesha

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome :)
Very nice use of words and thoughts. I liked the need of the words. Would be nice to hear the truth. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yes, sometimes it's the words we need to hear...
Thank you for appreciating this write, Coyo.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are my dear friend.
Such an interesting form, Yumna! Your experimentation is taking you to so many places in this 'juggle' of thoughts!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

That makes me smile :) Richard is really the one who showed me the direction of experimenting :))
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emmajoy

1 Year Ago

There you go! Although he's so often very generous about this or that scribble of mine, i think he.. read more
the deeper meaning is probably in the "unsaid"

it's in the eyes, the movement---

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Which we so often ignore...
Thank you for your insight, Jacob.
"How meaning
less."
Brilliant word play, meaning, form and flow of this poem. Words Meaning less. Who needs them? Great!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

That's an interesting interpretation! Thank you for appreciating this write 😊
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There are those that just like to hear themselves speak...I like your description of "paper thin, dry tones". Well done my friend. :) Julie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Aye, so there are.. Thank you for appreciating this one too 😊

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