Priorities

Priorities

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental. Written in fragments deliberately.

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~  a constant cycle of winning and losing ~ 

messed up priorities ... angry rebuttals 
oblivion; something to be desired 

confrontations ... denial of emotions
plucked up courage ... inflated egos

~ life stops and so do we --- perhaps ~


... waiting for that something missing in our lives to start ~ anew.



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Dr. YumnaKay
Probably my take on life...

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Yes, so frustrating- "We plan and Life happens"...sometimes not to our likings..."a constant cycle of winning and losing"- so true! Life sets it's own "Priorities" , as your poem so aptly and eloquently expresses. Love the form and flow- the movement back and forth of this poem. Brautiful Y.!

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Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Indeed. And all our plans go haywire...
Thank you for appreciating this write, Annette.



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" a constant cycle of winning and losing" loved this line. poem is so full in its meaning and how we sometimes completely give up and wait for something that can make us live again with new hopes.

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Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Yes, I agree. Thank you for liking :)
Yes, so frustrating- "We plan and Life happens"...sometimes not to our likings..."a constant cycle of winning and losing"- so true! Life sets it's own "Priorities" , as your poem so aptly and eloquently expresses. Love the form and flow- the movement back and forth of this poem. Brautiful Y.!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Indeed. And all our plans go haywire...
Thank you for appreciating this write, Annette.
Very impressive I love it! Very moving and deep with feelings and emotions. I expect great works like this from you sooner or later...Great Job!

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Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you. Glad you like it 😊
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You nailed the restless feeling most fight with daily. Feeling content in usually only momentary.

The want of more, clouds the priority list so easily!

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BBP

5 Months Ago

Unfortunately it does cause I have to work lol
Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Ahh yeah, of course lol that must be off putting 😛😉
BBP

5 Months Ago

Very hahaha
what a joy, reading all of these paradoxes...
life ...full of opposites...

for every ying there is a yang.

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Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

I like how you you interpret pieces. Thank you, Jacob :)
jacob erin-cilberto

5 Months Ago

i enjoy what you give me to interpret, my friend.
Oooh! the priorities of life and it's cycle are up to the point and clearly talked about!
Well done, keep it up Yumna! :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Shaan :)
Mr.Writer

5 Months Ago

No problem Yumna :)
I really enjoyed this piece.. very honest and open, life is a Rollercoaster of ups and downs.. great write!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Indeed, it is.. thank you, Kesha. Glad you enjoyed this piece :)
Kesha

5 Months Ago

You're welcome! :)
Nice formatting. Maybe try something like this with a blackout poem (my friend made one that was really solid from a cutout). I've no suggestions, but good job.

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Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Hmm, would you explain what do you mean by a blackout poem? I'm an amateur writer so idk what you me.. read more
Aslan Gerards

5 Months Ago

No problem! A blackout poem is a type of poem called found poetry. You take an old magazine, newspap.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Ah okay! That sounds interesting :) would def try that one out. Thanks again 😊
This fragmentary experiment works very well. Each is a bullit point of interest that takes the reader somewhat along intended pathways before they can continue alone according to their own experience.
Excellent.

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Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Which was what I was going for :)
Thank you for your interpretation and appreciation, Ken.

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