Sing Me To Sleep

Sing Me To Sleep

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental. Written hastily

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Sing me to sleep 
a lullaby 

transport me 
to heaven

dreams of 
neverland

unapproachable
still ~ what's left 

of memories 
untouched; 

let our love 
never falter

like unwatered 
lilies; withered

my eyelids 
droop

Sing me to sleep
a lullaby



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
Might be editing this... not sure about the structure..

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i like the structure ... punctuates each little couplet ...your poem sets me to dreaming easy ...drifting off to that lullaby ... sighhhhhhhh i miss them from me Ma and Da ... they both had their favorites ... especially me Da .. i hear his deep voice still :( i like this one a lot Dr.
E.


Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

This is such a nice thought! I'm glad it gave you that feeling. Thank you so much for appreciating, .. read more
Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

i use to sing "the goodnight song" to my children and they were all quite tolerant...except for the .. read more



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i like the structure ... punctuates each little couplet ...your poem sets me to dreaming easy ...drifting off to that lullaby ... sighhhhhhhh i miss them from me Ma and Da ... they both had their favorites ... especially me Da .. i hear his deep voice still :( i like this one a lot Dr.
E.


Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

This is such a nice thought! I'm glad it gave you that feeling. Thank you so much for appreciating, .. read more
Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

i use to sing "the goodnight song" to my children and they were all quite tolerant...except for the .. read more
Lovely poem. "Dreams of neverland"... Sing me a lullaby, gentle, lyrical...sing me a song of love..."my eyelids droop"...sooooo peaceful. Beautiful.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Annette. I'm glad you found it peaceful. I appreciate your words here :)
Yeah structure is good, it conveyed what you wanted to say...
It's so soothing, I might need a lullaby too now, hahaha...I enjoyed it...:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Hahah thank you, Surya! Glad you like it :)
So soothing to read....It feels like a poetic good night message..😀

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yeah probably because I'm suffering from lack of sleep lol
Thank you for your nice words here.. read more
Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

You are most welcome ☺
Very nice to be sung to sleep with a sweet lullaby. Nice flow of thoughts left the reader with a hopeful feeling and place. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Coyote. Appreciate your kind words here :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

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