As the night returns...

As the night returns...

A Chapter by Dr YumnaKay
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Experimental writing. Just writing it out...

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I am awake 
in the light of you 
which sparkles my day.

I am awake
in the dawn which
unearths the musty shadows.

I am awake
as the night returns
hearing your gaze whisper;

till the night blooms ~ 

and you remain oblivious 
to the uneasiness which haunts me
while I am ~ awake...



© 2017 Dr YumnaKay



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I really enjoyed reading this! It seems hopeful in a sense! Hope your night/day is lovely

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you, Kesha. Glad you enjoyed this piece :)
I hope yours is too 😊
Kesha

8 Months Ago

You're welcome and it's okay, just at work :P
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I can relate to this in every way possible!

Sleep likes to avoid me way too often and im more 'awake' in situations to which I wish I was oblivious lol

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Hah yeah ditto! Lol
Thank you, Bev. Appreciate your words :)
Awake is multifaceted here..
Pain lives far past is presence .
And ghost have the loudest cries.

Well Done.

Jazzy

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you. I appreciate your words here :)
J. J.  Nightingale

8 Months Ago

You are welcome Poet............... J.J.
I was shaking when I finished reading this!
The imagery I'm getting is absolutely gorgeous...
The emotions are well poured and highlight the poem!
Keep it up Yumna

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you, Shaan. Glad you felt the emotions here :)
Mr.Writer

8 Months Ago

No problem, I indeed did :)
Beautifully written. In night, we love. In day, we wonder & doubt. So very true. "I am awake in the light of you"-stunning line. "Hearing your gaze whisper". Love this!

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Dr YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you, Annette. I appreciate your words here 😊
these kinds of memories, we can''t erase...the "what if's"
the love squandered----
always ending up back in the same place...
destiny so unkind...even when there is a beautiful moon that should enhance the love...there is no love to enhance.
j.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Dr YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

True. And the worst kind is the uncertainty of being or not being in love..

Thank you.. read more

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Experimental Poetry


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Dr YumnaKay
Dr YumnaKay

Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



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