How often...

How often...

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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How often
those lies cross your lips,
invading the space between us.

How often
my veinless wrists grasp
onto the thin edges of your skin.

How often
I am, speechless
at the mystic aura
that surrounds you.

How often
I am, deceived
by the soft, brutal waves
that shake me to the core.

How often
I surrender;
to your lost touches
and woven lies...



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How amazing it is to learn so much by merely reading between the lies.. seeing them for what they are. Wonder if perhaps you, the writer, didn't want to let the YOU accept the truth.. 'I am, speechless ~ at the mystic aura ~ that surrounds you.'

When one meets an imagination that creates magic with language, one can easily be deceived!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I think the mind often plays games or maybe we are prone to denial...
Thank you for your word.. read more
emmajoy

1 Year Ago

Perhaps careful denial is better than over-quick acceptance! An analytical mind might think too muc.. read more



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WOW! Very powerful! Your writing is always beautiful & meaningful . . . but not so much focused into a detailed punch in the gut message. This one is very well crafted & structured & relatable to the core of one's heart (((HUGS)))

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for appreciating, BG. I'm glad you found it meaningful and relatable (:
How amazing it is to learn so much by merely reading between the lies.. seeing them for what they are. Wonder if perhaps you, the writer, didn't want to let the YOU accept the truth.. 'I am, speechless ~ at the mystic aura ~ that surrounds you.'

When one meets an imagination that creates magic with language, one can easily be deceived!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I think the mind often plays games or maybe we are prone to denial...
Thank you for your word.. read more
emmajoy

1 Year Ago

Perhaps careful denial is better than over-quick acceptance! An analytical mind might think too muc.. read more
Lies that invade the space between two people...excellent description. I liked this very much, but one question - why are your wrists "veinless"?

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ditto! My use of words is quite simplistic being that English ain't my first language ;) but I do se.. read more
Carol Cashes

1 Year Ago

*pshaw! Personally, in my opinion, your correct usage of "ain't" (to include the spelling) shows an.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Er I thought this was used commonly 😶
However, thanks again 😊
Lovely write! Another job well done, thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you like it 😊
Yes, how often we surrender....well said..

Sometimes we realize we have taken enough.

Other times.. we don't seem to mind...sigh

REAL !!!!

J.J.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

True.. Thank you for your thoughts here :)
J. J.  Nightingale

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Poet !!!.............
I love the imagery and emotions you've used across this poem Yumna!
Well done, keep it up!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Shaan. Glad you like it 😊
Mr.Writer

1 Year Ago

No problem :)
Hope all is well, Yumna...! Been a minute.
This had me evading the space between my mind and the lies that bind me in kind... Mystic auras and woven waves... How often, indeed... Vein-less wrists grabbing your thin skin... Dreadfully horribly wonderful imagery... Experimentally penned... (As always)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ah of course, all good here :) hope for that your end too, Silente :))
Thank you for your wor.. read more
Silente

1 Year Ago

That is good to hear, and of course... Never better...! Most welcome...
Very tactile Yumna.
I loved the phrase 'veinless wrists' !
I think evaded would be better if it were 'invading'...
Hi dear friend.
:))

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Tony Jordan

1 Year Ago

as an ancient garden gate...yes...lol...that's me.
Wires are passe - better go wireless Yumna.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ahh of course, to feel disconnected would be great lol without the burdens of those wires ;)
Tony Jordan

1 Year Ago

ahh ... I concur Dr Yumna...
To be disentangled and to float away into the ether...
bl.. read more
I really love this piece, it's a soothing read (to me), nicely penned!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Kesha! Glad you like it :))
Kesha

1 Year Ago

You're welcome

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