Symphony

Symphony

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental writing.

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my heart beats 

your name 
~
in symphony
 

your marble gaze 
falls 'pon me 

as the current in me 
flows vibrantly 

I was but an 
undead flower 

which craved 
your touch; 

now alive, more than ever, 
the breath of you 

soothing ... gently 
around my slightly shaking wrists... 

and even if I stop --- 


my heart beats

your name 
in symphony



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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I love the idea of a heart beating someone's name, because that was a really pretty way to describe love! This was a really nice romantic poem, and it was easy to read and enjoy.

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Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

I like that idea too ;)
Thank you for appreciating this piece as well. Glad you enjoyed 😊
Hearts beating a specific symphony is a brilliant idea. Love the music this poem played.

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Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you like it 😊
Poetic Beauty

4 Months Ago

You are quite welcome
Wow, Im wondering how the heart spells this persons name, its beautiful

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Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

I could tell you that ;)
Thank you for liking, J :)
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Ty
Direct and quick. Refined words culminating a flow. A symphony.

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Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Thank you, Ty. Appreciate your words here 😊
Beautiful poem . Keep it up

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Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you like it :)
Such a dreamy, sensational poem that gives amazing vibes Yumna!
I loved it, I really did!
Well done, keep it up :)

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Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

I'm glad it gave you the vibes, Shaan. Thank you for appreciating as always :)
Mr.Writer

4 Months Ago

No problem :)
Great earnest poetic write; an extended romantic composition of one's heart's desire! Simple lovely …….

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Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Thank you, Phill. I'm glad you like it :)
Great lyrical style. Love the delicacy, musicality, and flow of this. Love is a "Symphony"- yes! Beautiful.

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Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your words here, Annette. I appreciate it 😊
So beautiful dear friend. perfect use of words and thoughts. When someone name is a symphony. We are in love. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

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Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your words here, Coyote. Always appreciate it 😊
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

You are welcome dear friend.
Two can make beautiful music..Together...

Soft..Tender ... Beautiful..


Jazzy

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Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your words here. I appreciate it 😊
J. J.  Nightingale

4 Months Ago

You are welcome...............J.J.

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