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Moon pulls me ...

Moon pulls me ...

A Chapter by Dr YumnaKay
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Inspired.

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The moon pulls me,
​ 
as ripples of water flow through
​. 

Words form in my mind, 
stumbling forward
​,​
​ ​
I screw my eyes
​,​
 

as an array of sentences crash through
​ 
​... c
ollapsing, the moon pulls me 
​in deeper, 

the memories I held back 
come toppling over one another, 

swaying a little, 
I give in, 
the attraction's too much, 

I lock my glance ~ mesmerized ... 
by the beauty it holds, 

and in that very moment --
beautiful words arrange themselves; 

on the heavenly sky --- 
a poem ~ is formed ...


Thank you, J Todd Underhill, for airing my little piece :)
https://soundcloud.com/user-557255780/coffee-with-underhill-07-21-2017



© 2017 Dr YumnaKay



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The moon and the muse often call in tandem. The moon pulls lime the tides, ""swaying a little, I give in...a poem is formed." Lovely, ethereal imagery. Delicate and rhythmic flow, like silk. Stunning poem.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Annette. I appreciate your lovely words here :))
This is a very poetic way of describing feelings as if they were waves subject to the Moon and its phases.
I enjoyed this - Good job.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

I like your interpretation. Thank you for appreciating this write 😊
A beautiful pull the Earth does to the moon, to sync in such a perfect rotation!

* Btw, attractions (attraction's) apostrophe

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

That it does :)
Oops yeah, you got that right. Thank you for that 😊
Nature can inspire love, music, poetry and a great many other things. Love how the moon has captivated you and convinced you to write a poem about her

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Ah okay, I get it :)
And yeah I know that :))
Poetic Beauty

11 Months Ago

Sorry I have a very unique way of thinking sometimes.
Dr YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

That's cool! I'll have to get used to it ;) :)
Wow! I'm literally stunned by the beauty of this piece...
The calm, gentle and hopeful emotions it holds in the poem, that I'm left to feel dreamy...
I really enjoyed reading this...
Well done, keep it up Yumna!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Shaan. Always appreciate your words :))
Mr.Writer

11 Months Ago

No problem Yumna! :)

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