~ I live ~

~ I live ~

A Chapter by Dr YumnaKay
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Experimental. Inspired.

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I live
in the melancholy
of daydreams

I live
in the mere thought
of your being

I live
in the oceans
of shattered hopes

I live
in the extravagance
of your scent


I utter
a sigh of relief

and

~ I am home ~



© 2017 Dr YumnaKay



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The human brain is divided into two distinct cerebral hemisphere connected by the corpus callosum which give us right brain VS left brain functions. It has been suggested, one of the ‘Right’ brain characteristics are ‘words and language’. From the looks of this wonderfully formatted poetically penned composition – your creativity shines abundant! Excellent …………

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

And I'm left handed actually 😊
Thank you for the lovely words of appreciation, Phill. Glad.. read more
Phill Oz O'fee

11 Months Ago

Ahhh .... there it is then - our left side controls are creativity! :-)
Dr YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Probably I'm not that creative 😶



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Why is your poetry always so beauitful? I love the images you provoke here

Posted 11 Months Ago


Dr YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Kesha. Glad you think so 😊😊
Kesha

11 Months Ago

You're welcome :)
The human brain is divided into two distinct cerebral hemisphere connected by the corpus callosum which give us right brain VS left brain functions. It has been suggested, one of the ‘Right’ brain characteristics are ‘words and language’. From the looks of this wonderfully formatted poetically penned composition – your creativity shines abundant! Excellent …………

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

And I'm left handed actually 😊
Thank you for the lovely words of appreciation, Phill. Glad.. read more
Phill Oz O'fee

11 Months Ago

Ahhh .... there it is then - our left side controls are creativity! :-)
Dr YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Probably I'm not that creative 😶
Such a clear, touching and dreamy-like poem Yumna...
It again expresses beauty in a mind of deep thoughts!
Well done, keep it up!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Shaan. I appreciate your words here :-)
Mr.Writer

11 Months Ago

No problem Yumna! :)
I like the way it drips down the right side of the page... and the structure of the three lines, with the last verse split by the 'and'.

Clever stuff. Reflective and inspiring reflection.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Jibey. This was actually inspired by a friend. Glad you like it :-)
Ever expressive phrases, touching heart and mind. Your experimental writing is flying high, Yumna!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Emma. I'm glad you think so. Truly appreciate your words here, as always :))
emmajoy

11 Months Ago

Such a pleasure, sweet pea!
I live in the dentine of your molars
joking...

Great posey of poetry here Yumna.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Hahah then it's a useless case ;) I'll have to extract the tooth 😛😂😂
Thank you, Ton.. read more
Many touching lines in personal to me...I liked it..:)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Surya. Glad you did. :))

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