Anchored

Anchored

A Chapter by Closed
"

Experimental.

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I am ~ anchored

to the shackles of blatant

love

that holds ~ me ...







© 2017 Closed



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Maybe experimental but holds a lot of wisdom. Lots of ways to take this profound piece.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your kind words, Ken. I appreciate it 😊
Short and oceans deep, wonderful piece :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

1 Month Ago

Thank you, Kesha. Glad you like it 😊
Kesha

1 Month Ago

You're welcome 😊😊
well , love won't let go sometimes and yes it anchors you and your heart..

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

1 Month Ago

Yes, I think so too... Thank you for your words here :)
True love doesn't feel like shackles - it feels like shackle-busting freedom.

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Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

2 Months Ago

Well even 'true love' doesn't always turn out to feel good, in the long run.
Welcome Yumna of.. read more
Tony Jordan

2 Months Ago

I liked the use of the tilde as a visual device by the way...very cool.
Closed

2 Months Ago

I was actually listening to this song 'Ocean Water' by Citrus Cloud when I wrote this lol you should.. read more
Ah! so strong and deep...

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Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

2 Months Ago

Ah, thank you for appreciating ;) :)
Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

You're welcome. ☺
Woah! This is powerful and beautiful in many ways Yumna...
Can't wait to see what you add on!
Well done, keep it up!

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Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

2 Months Ago

Thank you for the extravagant praise, Shaan. I will ;)
Glad you like it 😊
Mr.Writer

2 Months Ago

No problem Yumna! :)

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I wouldn't be here if I knew anything about me... Self proclaimed writer. Professionally a dentist... Somewhere floating in between. 23. ~ more..

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