I carry you in my heart ~ still

I carry you in my heart ~ still

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental. Prosepoem. Written as a palindrome accidentally :p

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I carry you in my heart ~ still
weaving around our unmet horizons as I dig my feet into the shallows to keep myself from falling down, while losing the sight of you ... and I've stopped dreaming of a nonexistent heaven 
in which - 

I carry you in my heart ~ still








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What timing or me to read this particular piece. I can not only relate, but I am in awe of your approach to it. This is very well written and powerful in only a few lines. "weaving around our unmet horizons" I am without words at this moment. Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I am very much humbled by your appreciation. Glad you like it and can relate. Thank you, Ed.



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A gorgeous litany of words...has me tongue tied at the moment. So glad I came by!

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your lovely words, Kelly. Glad you like it 😊
An excellent almost gossamer use of words which fit the emotions exactly.

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your words here, Ken. I appreciate it :)
Those kind of the poems which are written swiftly from the heart, reach into our hearts in the same swift tenderness, though the sadness of lost love is filled through the words, still it's sweetly touching.

Thank You for sharing these little beauties with us.

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for appreciating this piece, Light. It was indeed written from the depths of my heart...read more
What timing or me to read this particular piece. I can not only relate, but I am in awe of your approach to it. This is very well written and powerful in only a few lines. "weaving around our unmet horizons" I am without words at this moment. Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I am very much humbled by your appreciation. Glad you like it and can relate. Thank you, Ed.
Deeply expressed Yumna...
Your feelings and emotions come clear in this poem of yours and leaves a moment of silence for the readers
Well done, keep it up :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Shaan. I appreciate your words here :))
Mr.Writer

1 Year Ago

No problem :)
They speak of "reading between the lines," and your lines are so full, like grapevines hung with clusters of their sweet and bittersweet fruit. How the taste lingers long after one swallows. Painfully beautiful.

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An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

I'm always glad to see you posting, dear INTJ. When I was very young out in California we had grapes.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ah, then I'm glad it reminded you of home :)
An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

May your writing bring you home too, always. :)
Wanted to see this keep going, to be quite honest...
I dunno...
But the underlying tone to most of your recent writes...
A love(r) being behind a transparent sheet of unbreakable glass.
I always get the feeling of panging-longing, but tinged with a regrettable acceptance...
Moving on is hard, in ANY form, Whether it be with people, or our own emotions...
Abruptly, but well penned...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Year Ago

Like you say, growth is part of everyday, and nothing shameful about that...
Aye, some people.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

not shameful, I think it's just hard to accept sometimes...
Hopefully I will and yeah guess t.. read more
Silente

1 Year Ago

However you put it... It suckssss, heh
Write how you want, at the time you wan, and it will m.. read more
I saw a premature baby - not surviving - in this.


Posted 1 Year Ago


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Tony Jordan

1 Year Ago

You'll get all the thrills you need from working life Yumna, beieve me. It has all it's own rules an.. read more
Tony Jordan

1 Year Ago

*believe me* even...
;p
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

hahahahah not even half the fun, TJ. It gets boring lol
This is beautiful.. I really loved the softness of this

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Kesha. Glad you like it :))
Kesha

1 Year Ago

You are very welcome :)

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