I carry you in my heart ~ still

I carry you in my heart ~ still

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental. Prosepoem. Written as a palindrome accidentally :p

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I carry you in my heart ~ still
weaving around our unmet horizons as I dig my feet into the shallows to keep myself from falling down, while losing the sight of you ... and I've stopped dreaming of a nonexistent heaven 
in which - 

I carry you in my heart ~ still








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What timing or me to read this particular piece. I can not only relate, but I am in awe of your approach to it. This is very well written and powerful in only a few lines. "weaving around our unmet horizons" I am without words at this moment. Well done.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

I am very much humbled by your appreciation. Glad you like it and can relate. Thank you, Ed.



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A gorgeous litany of words...has me tongue tied at the moment. So glad I came by!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely words, Kelly. Glad you like it 😊
An excellent almost gossamer use of words which fit the emotions exactly.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you for your words here, Ken. I appreciate it :)
Those kind of the poems which are written swiftly from the heart, reach into our hearts in the same swift tenderness, though the sadness of lost love is filled through the words, still it's sweetly touching.

Thank You for sharing these little beauties with us.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating this piece, Light. It was indeed written from the depths of my heart...read more
What timing or me to read this particular piece. I can not only relate, but I am in awe of your approach to it. This is very well written and powerful in only a few lines. "weaving around our unmet horizons" I am without words at this moment. Well done.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

I am very much humbled by your appreciation. Glad you like it and can relate. Thank you, Ed.
Deeply expressed Yumna...
Your feelings and emotions come clear in this poem of yours and leaves a moment of silence for the readers
Well done, keep it up :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Shaan. I appreciate your words here :))
Mr.Writer

3 Months Ago

No problem :)
They speak of "reading between the lines," and your lines are so full, like grapevines hung with clusters of their sweet and bittersweet fruit. How the taste lingers long after one swallows. Painfully beautiful.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An owl on the moon

3 Months Ago

I'm always glad to see you posting, dear INTJ. When I was very young out in California we had grapes.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Ah, then I'm glad it reminded you of home :)
An owl on the moon

3 Months Ago

May your writing bring you home too, always. :)
Wanted to see this keep going, to be quite honest...
I dunno...
But the underlying tone to most of your recent writes...
A love(r) being behind a transparent sheet of unbreakable glass.
I always get the feeling of panging-longing, but tinged with a regrettable acceptance...
Moving on is hard, in ANY form, Whether it be with people, or our own emotions...
Abruptly, but well penned...

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

Like you say, growth is part of everyday, and nothing shameful about that...
Aye, some people.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

not shameful, I think it's just hard to accept sometimes...
Hopefully I will and yeah guess t.. read more
Silente

3 Months Ago

However you put it... It suckssss, heh
Write how you want, at the time you wan, and it will m.. read more
I saw a premature baby - not surviving - in this.


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

3 Months Ago

You'll get all the thrills you need from working life Yumna, beieve me. It has all it's own rules an.. read more
Tony Jordan

3 Months Ago

*believe me* even...
;p
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

hahahahah not even half the fun, TJ. It gets boring lol
This is beautiful.. I really loved the softness of this

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Kesha. Glad you like it :))
Kesha

3 Months Ago

You are very welcome :)

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