Ephemeral

Ephemeral

A Chapter by Closed
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Experimental. Written off the top of my head...

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Life smiles
when you do,

everything falls
back to place.

The sound of 
your distant breath;

ephemeral,

 yet...
lasting
~
an eternity...



© 2017 Closed



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Your first two lines echo what two different friends told me in the last 24 hours! One shared a very old-time song with these lyrics. I guess everyone is needing a smile these days. I love the word "ephemeral" & the way you've used it!

https://youtu.be/yfsmmk93H3I

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5 Months Ago

I came by this word recently and wanted to write something regarding it so I'm glad you like how I u.. read more
barleygirl

5 Months Ago

Einstein shared that song with me this morning, by the way (((HUGS)))



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A bit like loving whispers ....... ahhhhhhhhh! Deliciously stimulating write ... :-)

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5 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely words, Phill. I appreciate it (:
A very spiritual thought Yumna. Well written.

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5 Months Ago

Thank you, Ken. I appreciate your words here :)
But sometimes you need teach life to smile when you yourself are smiling, to be happy on your own. Only then can someone else truly love you, a great piece though, I love it :)

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5 Months Ago

Hm I agree with what you say. For me it's easier to be happy when I see my loved ones happy :) ;) read more
Kesha

5 Months Ago

You are very welcome:)

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