I fade ...

I fade ...

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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As the dawn rises, I fade 

in the distant afterglow clinging to the silhouette, 
tracing all the way back to your faint outline ...
 my words ~ flow; forming an invisible bridge 
to overcome the unseen barrier time created 
between you and me

I fade, as the dawn rises



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Your writing. Had the feel of the ancient writers. They made you feel every word. The poem had the feel of a private thought or moment. Gentle statement were loud and clear. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Month Ago

That's very humbling. Thank you so much, yet again, I truly appreciate your taking the time to read .. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.



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Your writing. Had the feel of the ancient writers. They made you feel every word. The poem had the feel of a private thought or moment. Gentle statement were loud and clear. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Month Ago

That's very humbling. Thank you so much, yet again, I truly appreciate your taking the time to read .. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.
I enjoyed reading this! For some reason, this reminds me of ''Vampire Diaries'' :D!
Thank you for sharing Yumna :)!I love your work!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

That's an interesting comparison! Thank you for appreciating, Zaisha. Glad you enjoyed 😊
I was back to being a little girl again because your chapter made me travel and to imagine your writing I explored my imagination like a kid

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating this write 😊
Melancholically beautiful.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Ken (:
Absolutely Love this, so beautiful.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating (:
Gorgeous, powerful emotions sweep through Your words, unto us, splendid piece of art, so special and caress such deep levels of one's being, I believe my most favourite read from You, Thank You*

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you for such a glowing review, Light. I appreciate your words here (:
Shadows are fun to chase. When you catch one, can you tell me if their ticklish? When I grace them, they reflect. I think they lack the funny bone.

I enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

That's a nice interpretation. Thank you, Joe. Glad you enjoyed (:
I always love your poetry and the structures and formats you use. Each one reads differently, it's very refreshing.
This is a beautiful poem here, it's soothing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your lovely words, Nerissa. Glad you like this one (:
Hope you're well .. read more
Sinbulvinter

3 Months Ago

You're welcome. =)
I'm doing all right. I hope you're well as well.
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

:p almost lol
A peaceful, strong poem that gives different types of vibes, and let's us further investigate the pictures created from it!
I really enjoyed the imagery of the poem, the poem itself, it was very well done Yumna!!!
Keep it up :))

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Shaan (:
There is no time, there is no distance between people who have this sacred connection. All shrinks. All stops. It's truly wonderful to experience at least once in Life. It changes our whole outlook.
You nailed it here Yumna :)))

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Tony Jordan

3 Months Ago

sorry - I hope you enjoyed (past tense) it...
:))
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

:p if sleeping all day counts in enjoying then yes lol 😜
Tony Jordan

3 Months Ago

slothing is legit - yep...

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Experimental Poetry


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