I fade ...

I fade ...

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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As the dawn rises ~ I fade 

in the distant afterglow clinging to the silhouette, 
tracing all the way back to your faint outline ...
 my words ~ flow; forming an invisible bridge 
to overcome the unseen barrier time created 
between you and me

I fade ~ as the dawn rises



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Your writing. Had the feel of the ancient writers. They made you feel every word. The poem had the feel of a private thought or moment. Gentle statement were loud and clear. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

That's very humbling. Thank you so much, yet again, I truly appreciate your taking the time to read .. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.



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Make me fell you were having a 'really nice dream'; from which you regret awakening! Lovely, luscious and mystical write - :-)

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

Hahah maybe ;p
Thank you for your nice interpretation and for liking, Phill. I appreciate it.. read more
It seems like a riddle to me. It was pleasing to read this, very descriptive. Loved it.

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

That's a nice way to describe this. Thank you, Najam. Glad you like it 😊
Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

You're welcome. ☺

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Experimental Poetry


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