~ Invisible ~

~ Invisible ~

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Inspired. Written as a description of my current state of mind. Maybe a description of myself...

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She was ~ invisible ... among thousands of souls

 
there strolled one more. A non entity; nothing special, except for in her own head.
 
Time and again she wandered, deeper still into her own mind; probing, encountering submerged thoughts; 

her eyes sparkled --- and her lips curled into a sideways smile. 


Among thousands of souls, she was ~ invisible ...



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Oh to be invisible, to see what others hide.. bad, bad me.. but honest!

Your words wear an almost tortured shawl.. as if disappearing into a self-inflicted cloud of hopelessness.. not sure the sparkling eyes were happy .. perhaps sparkling with tears.. ..

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

You read deeper into my words than I have conveyed but so accurate...thank you for your thoughts her.. read more
emmajoy

3 Months Ago

Your writing deserves careful reading. Emotions aren't merely- how to put it - linguistic ingredient.. read more



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This is really nicely penned. We do feel like we are invisible sometimes and this poem expresses that state really well.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

3 Months Ago

I think you'll find Najam was appreciating TJ more than 'Invisible' by YumnaKay
just saying.... read more
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Ikr, I don't mind haha I love your reviews more than what I write anyways, TJ 😉💜
Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

You are most welcome Yumna.
I appreciate both the things Tony. 😄
Woah...I got chills as I read this!
I felt the emotions of sadness and despair hit me hard!
Well done, keep it up Yumna


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Shaan (:
Mr.Writer

3 Months Ago

No problem :)
Wow - what a waste...
If I was invisible I would be straight down the local gym for the ladies salsa - before and afta !! lol
Great use of format to help convey the ethereal mood.
A woman went to the doctors and said to the doctor - I feel like I'm invisible - the doctor said, "Next !"


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

3 Months Ago

Hi Najam - thank you lol
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Aye, I do ;) have been looking at the mirror ever since you mentioned haha 😜😂
Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

I laughed reading that. Thanks for the smile after it. 😀

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