Composure

Composure

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental. Writing off my weird mind and heart. Another attempt at poetry.

"
the night plays ~

fancy images
hover
high up in the sky,

a make believe
truth,
a half spoken lie.

The tell tale
signs
of my throbbing heart

unable to hide the
sweet
composure I wrap myself in,

as the night ~ plays.



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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"a make believe
truth,
a half spoken lie."

Sound like a lyric. Nice nice nice one.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Well, didn't intend it to be but glad it comes off as that :) thank you for appreciating this write... read more
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BBP
So soft and flows so well it hides a deep meaning possibly a dark one ... so obviously I love it 😍

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

12 Months Ago

Aye, you judged right ;) thank you so much for appreciating this one, Bev :))
Perceptive and recognizable... the right justification and the careful construction hold together this emotional gem. 'Sweet composure'... very Yumna :-)

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

12 Months Ago

:p haha maybe ;) thank you so much for your words here, Jibey. Glad you appreciate 😊
The words rolls like a song. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to nice ending. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

12 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating, Coyote. Glad you like it 😊
Coyote Poetry

12 Months Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome.
Often, when we are enamored with someone our head is in the clouds and composure becomes a test. I've been there.

~And yes, this is poetry~ :)

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

12 Months Ago

Aye, and what a test it is...
Thank you so much for your words here, Tim. I appreciate 😊
pretty romantic write...relationships can be that way...like a beautiful half-moon...and the night sounds like a symphony...

nicely done.

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

12 Months Ago

Like a symphony, beautiful description..thank you, Jacob. Glad you like it 😊
' unable to hide the
sweet
composure I wrap myself in,
as the night ~ plays. '

Beautiful writing, beautiful meaning, beautiful...

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

12 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your words and for appreciating, Emma. 😊💜
emmajoy

12 Months Ago

Smiling happy thoughts.. ..

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Added on September 19, 2017
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Experimental Poetry


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Dr. YumnaKay
Dr. YumnaKay

Pakistan



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