yet another day ...

yet another day ...

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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the night falls ~ velvety gray,

yet another day comes to an end, 
this time glittering and content.

The sun above smiled a toothless grin, 

while in between the horizons 
something beckoned me close ... 

closer still ...

as the night falls velvety ~ gray.



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Gul
The night falls~velvety gray. yet another comes to an end....
These lines stroke me to live a better life everyday. Its so touching and emotional, that my days are just passing and this life goes on.

The circulation of day and night meets everyday and goes.

Fantastically written!!!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Aye, it does go on... Thank you for your lovely words here, Gul. I appreciate it 😊



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Gul
The night falls~velvety gray. yet another comes to an end....
These lines stroke me to live a better life everyday. Its so touching and emotional, that my days are just passing and this life goes on.

The circulation of day and night meets everyday and goes.

Fantastically written!!!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Aye, it does go on... Thank you for your lovely words here, Gul. I appreciate it 😊
Velvet and gay, toothless grins of happy stars, and night falling on hapless mars... Closer still, eh? To that perfect style, and still you are laying down that almost sinister smoothness...

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Silente

11 Months Ago

Haha, I will forgive you this once, just means I have to do some extra digging... But what does it l.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

you gotta dig deep to read good stuff lmaoo jk :P ;P
Silente

11 Months Ago

Haha, you joke... But there is more than a smidge of truth to it...
Seems an adjustment of thoughts here. Two days, two greetings. Your feelings swing from glittering contentment to another mood- duller, dimmer - a lurking of shadows perhaps.

Fine write, my friend.. as ever always.

Posted 11 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

This was written in an attempt to mark my convocation day..while the day was a success, the night al.. read more
emmajoy

11 Months Ago

Good morning, Dr. YumnaKay.
No foreboding,surely.. more a long,strong exhale of tension, lu.. read more
love the mystery here...something wicked this way comes?
or something wonderful this way comes...

we never know for sure....there is always that gray area....

really like that you give us visuals here, but you leave much to the imagination.
j.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Aye, so there is and it always leaves us wondering... Thank you for your words here, Jacob. Glad you.. read more
Such a tender awakening in the joy of day's end and night's coming birth. Like the changing of seasons, the rhythms of day and night dance with such divine elegance. So happy you're back, dear Yumna! :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely words, Craig. And yes, tis good to be back :))
An owl on the moon

11 Months Ago

We shall all try and be extra kind to keep you here. :)
Damn...great job Yumna! It's so easy to read your writing, like wow!
Keep it up :))

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Shaan. Glad you like it 😊😊

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