I was made ...

I was made ...

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental. Current state of mind ...

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I was made 
carved out of stone 
with a heart that bleeds 

... silenced till death.


I was made
to follow,
too meek to argue 

... with tones, hushed.


I was made --- human
born with flaws; a contradiction,
meant to be sought 

... never understood.



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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The state of mind you reference is clearly stated in this piece...

That said:

"I was made
to follow,
too meek to argue "

NOOOOO!!! Your piece about your title as "Doctor" and the dedication required to achieve that tells me otherwise about you.

Please, please, would more of you female poets write of your strength, and your ability to keep getting up every day and functioning, your huge hearts that carry huge weights, but "carry" is the operative word, not giving up or giving in...even if some days are spent on your knees - even semi-upright is still "upright".

I'm sorry, you write so well, so eloquently...I want to be inspired and read works by gifted poets such as yourself and raise my fist high shouting "Hell, yeah!"



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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Week Ago

Ah, Carol, I always do try to balance both but sometimes it's just easier to spill out what I feel a.. read more


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The state of mind you reference is clearly stated in this piece...

That said:

"I was made
to follow,
too meek to argue "

NOOOOO!!! Your piece about your title as "Doctor" and the dedication required to achieve that tells me otherwise about you.

Please, please, would more of you female poets write of your strength, and your ability to keep getting up every day and functioning, your huge hearts that carry huge weights, but "carry" is the operative word, not giving up or giving in...even if some days are spent on your knees - even semi-upright is still "upright".

I'm sorry, you write so well, so eloquently...I want to be inspired and read works by gifted poets such as yourself and raise my fist high shouting "Hell, yeah!"



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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Week Ago

Ah, Carol, I always do try to balance both but sometimes it's just easier to spill out what I feel a.. read more
Well structured..When you think about it, teeth are a bit like humans, 'born with flaws'.

I can recommend a good dentist!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Week Ago

😛 hahah I appreciate your humour here, thank you for reading, Jibey 😊
I was made
to read outstanding
short poems by lovely dentists.

I like it Doc

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Week Ago

This is such a gorgeous comment! Thank you so much for reading and appreciating, Ted. 😊
Internally reflecting

Great Read

Matthew

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Week Ago

Thank you for reading.
Matthew Kult

1 Week Ago

You are welcome

Matthew

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Added on November 9, 2017
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Tags: contradiction, contemplation, irony, flaws, poetry(?)

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