I was made ...

I was made ...

A Chapter by Closed
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Experimental. Current state of mind ...

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I was made 
carved out of stone 
with a heart that bleeds 

... silenced till death.


I was made
to follow,
too meek to argue 

... with tones, hushed.


I was made --- human
born with flaws; a contradiction,
meant to be sought 

... never understood.



© 2017 Closed



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You were born woman, the carrier of life, the carer, the comforter, the gentle hand.. Those are the requisites society should treasure.. and so should any and all non.male creatures! Beautifully tender, tragic words, dear friend.. your eloquence makes me proud..

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Guess it's been an age old dilemma on how to really treat the women. Thank you so much for your word.. read more



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To be human is to be fragile, yes we bear so much, and yet beautiful in our mess. Loved the read!

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Thank you for your words here and for appreciating, Karen :)
You were born woman, the carrier of life, the carer, the comforter, the gentle hand.. Those are the requisites society should treasure.. and so should any and all non.male creatures! Beautifully tender, tragic words, dear friend.. your eloquence makes me proud..

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Guess it's been an age old dilemma on how to really treat the women. Thank you so much for your word.. read more
The state of mind you reference is clearly stated in this piece...

That said:

"I was made
to follow,
too meek to argue "

NOOOOO!!! Your piece about your title as "Doctor" and the dedication required to achieve that tells me otherwise about you.

Please, please, would more of you female poets write of your strength, and your ability to keep getting up every day and functioning, your huge hearts that carry huge weights, but "carry" is the operative word, not giving up or giving in...even if some days are spent on your knees - even semi-upright is still "upright".

I'm sorry, you write so well, so eloquently...I want to be inspired and read works by gifted poets such as yourself and raise my fist high shouting "Hell, yeah!"



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Ah, Carol, I always do try to balance both but sometimes it's just easier to spill out what I feel a.. read more
Well structured..When you think about it, teeth are a bit like humans, 'born with flaws'.

I can recommend a good dentist!

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😛 hahah I appreciate your humour here, thank you for reading, Jibey 😊
I was made
to read outstanding
short poems by lovely dentists.

I like it Doc

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This is such a gorgeous comment! Thank you so much for reading and appreciating, Ted. 😊
Internally reflecting

Great Read

Matthew

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Thank you for reading.
Matthew Kult

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You are welcome

Matthew

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