Balderdash

Balderdash

A Chapter by Closed
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Ramblings of an exhausted mind. Short diary entry...

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In silence I wander, to distant places of my mind, probing, exploring the depths of the cavernous labyrinth. It frightens me, of what I'm capable of; of what I have so far gone through. I could not be sane - after all that, after everything, this body, this face, with a half smile etched across, though hollow, feels like an accomplishment. 

I.am.a.miracle.on.its.own.​




© 2018 Closed



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Reading your journey, following those pathways that wind through you into the deep places, the dark places. Even there I believe you'll find light, etched joy you've never known. For the farther on you go, the more of you will be found. A miracle indeed.

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Thank you so much for your understanding words here, Craig. As always, appreciated. :)
An owl on the moon

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There is a game here called Balderdash... but it does not have the depth of you, my dear friend. :)



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Hope and the human will are mighty forces, as so eloquently conveyed in his piece. It's difficult to comprehend, and defies nature, that we're stronger with each struggle. It's indeed an "accomplishment" and one to celebrate. I always enjoy your work!

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So it is. Thank you so much for your insight here, Robert. I like your reviews on my pieces :) Glad .. read more
Reading your journey, following those pathways that wind through you into the deep places, the dark places. Even there I believe you'll find light, etched joy you've never known. For the farther on you go, the more of you will be found. A miracle indeed.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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1 Week Ago

Thank you so much for your understanding words here, Craig. As always, appreciated. :)
An owl on the moon

1 Week Ago

There is a game here called Balderdash... but it does not have the depth of you, my dear friend. :)
.. and so it is... we are often amazed at ourselves...

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So we are... thank you for your words here, Jibey. Appreciated :)
we are all miracles in some way....and we also find often that we feel a miracle to still be sane after all we have gone through...but we still question that sanity...i wonder if poetry keeps us on that fence, hanging on with precarious balance.

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Thank you for your insight here, Jacob. I like your thoughts. Appreciated :)
the title grabbed me with curiosity. the past need not define the future.

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I agree. Thank you for reading and your words here :)

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