Oozing II

Oozing II

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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the night beckons me ~ closer. 

The leaves of tomorrow rustle softly, 
yet menacing. 
Barefooted, I walk, 
the scars on my arms, 
my thighs tingle 
...the evening breeze touches them, 
almost kissing. 
And those on my heart, 
kept hidden, oozing... 

the night beckons me ~ closer. 







© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay



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Seems to me, your words are a mix of both warmth and fear. Words suchas 'almost kissing' and 'manacing' don'#t make good bed-fellows at all. Whilst as always, your touch is gentle and brief, there's a heaviness somewhere.. perhaps. Perhaps. Hugs, dear friend.

Posted 9 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

Interesting observation and interpretation. I like that :) I think heaviness describes the feeling I.. read more



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As a person who prefers a bit of danger with my passion, I love the way your poem blends the two ideas in a lightly suggestive way. I love how your descriptions are vivid with some double-meanings that keep a reader wondering (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

I'm glad it made you wonder. Thank you so much for appreciating, BG. Hugs back :)
Your imagery is spectacular in this poem. Still, it's not a place or time I'd wish to be. Walking in the darkness, scarred and vulnerable, is a terrifying feeling, perhaps enough to run, if not for the engulfing blackness and bare feet. Maybe I'm reading more deeply than I should on this piece. Nonetheless, it's another excellent write.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

I've always felt a strong if somewhat melancholic connection with the night but no, you read it the .. read more
Seems to me, your words are a mix of both warmth and fear. Words suchas 'almost kissing' and 'manacing' don'#t make good bed-fellows at all. Whilst as always, your touch is gentle and brief, there's a heaviness somewhere.. perhaps. Perhaps. Hugs, dear friend.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

Interesting observation and interpretation. I like that :) I think heaviness describes the feeling I.. read more
You are an expert in this style, each time You gift something new with few words, speaking to the emtions and touching the senses with a soft brush, yet urge it to go deep... wonderful piece again Yumna, emotive and real!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

That humbles me very much. I'm glad you think this way about my writes. And yes, I'm rather fond of .. read more
Light

9 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend, and yes I believe You feel closer to this style, it's reflected by how pe.. read more
I love the slightly melancholy feel to your words. Wonderful images as well. Beautiful writing my friend. :) Julie

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much for feeling this write, Julie. Appreciate your lovely words :)
This feels like a gentle release, even if only temporary. I'm a creature of the night, so I relate to this on a personal level. There is a bit of freedom that the night seems to bring. Wonderful write!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

Aye, it was indeed written as a release of sorts so I'm glad you take it that way. And I agree, the .. read more
Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

9 Months Ago

It was a pleasure.

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Experimental Poetry