Realms of Thunder

Realms of Thunder

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental. Just a touch dramatic ;)

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Realms of Thunder

And what if 
among the rubble of half vomitted maybe's 
erupts a cyclone of leftover, 
half dreamed tomorrows 

and what if 
it hits just below the surface, 
enough to make you fall, 
enough to make you cry out

and what if 
among the remains of time, 
your music flows, 
awakened yet half dead ...

But oh, my clandestine lover, 
I will have prepared for the night, 
my lips stained purple, I shall puke 
into the realms of thunder, unearthed ...



© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay



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This is poetry my friend.
"But oh, my clandestine lover,
I will have prepared for the night, my lips stained purple,
I shall puke into the realms of thunder, unearthed "
I liked the honest tone and the coldness of the words. You made me believe every one. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating, Coyote. Glad you like it :)
Coyote Poetry

8 Months Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.



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A powerful, unbeautiful piece of writing that says more than logic decree. Release, confession, desperation, anger.. at being trapped.. Perhaps?

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

It's a release of sorts, yes... thank you so much for your words here, Em. Appreciated :)
emmajoy

8 Months Ago

I try never to be too personal, but not always as tactful as might be, dear you.
fantastic write, compelling... your words are like a lightening bolt that strikes the reader. adore the imagery you’ve captured in this!!

~ thanks for the read ~ xx

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much, ms. barrie! Your reviews always make me happy :) Glad you appreciate x
This is powerful stuff indeed...It maybe experimental but it delivers that all important and unexpected kidney punch that takes your breath away...................Neville

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating, Neville. I'm glad it feels that way :)
Neville Pettitt

8 Months Ago

My pleasure...........
i think our memories regurgitate too often....and that sickness doesn't allow us to move on from those dreams we failed to go after...there is that sickening guilt....that resufaces...

powerful write.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

I think so too. .. moving on isn't as simple as some make it appear to be.
Thank you so much .. read more
Oh so deep and when it’s all in halves trying to become whole and one where the wrenching of emotions leave you struggling to survive and the ill feeling allowing nothing to stay inside dictates to the sense of uncertainty and upheaval that makes you want to vomit only to have to heal all over again- powerful words making mind churn deep🌹

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your empathetic words here. I appreciate it :)
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

8 Months Ago

ALways my pleasure🌹
It seems that Coyote understands it more than I do! There is a feeling of want and hope - the music, yet somehow it is overwhelmed by the forces beyond control - producing only vomit...

An intriguing enigma.. dark and sad

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Sometimes, that's inevitable...
thank you for your words here, Jibey. Appreciated.
This is poetry my friend.
"But oh, my clandestine lover,
I will have prepared for the night, my lips stained purple,
I shall puke into the realms of thunder, unearthed "
I liked the honest tone and the coldness of the words. You made me believe every one. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating, Coyote. Glad you like it :)
Coyote Poetry

8 Months Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.

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