A Lost Fight (Limerick)

How I wished this happened. Lol

I once met a man in the gym,

his hair had a right funny trim.

He dared me to fight,

thought I'd run in fright,

'til I grabbed him by his long limb!

Author's Note

Rest is up to reader's imagination ;)

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This, to me, is one of your best limericks that I've read becuz of the way it flows from start to finish, reads like a story, no bumps, very smoothly conceived. The ending seems like it could have a double entendre for those with a dirty mind, but it also conjures up a variety of possibilities for: "long limb"(s) *smile* Fondly, Margie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'll give credits to Richard for the smoothness in this one :) and ah, why didn't I see that possibility in the long limbs?! :P but my next limerick which I posted today verges on that 'dirtyness' 😜😂
Thank you so much! I'm humbled by your appreciation 💜

[Wanda Vergara-Yates]

Ouch, especially if the wrong one was grabbed.

[augustus]

I'm wondering just what you meant by his long limb! Nevertheless painful!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I did mean limb in the literal sense but it's nice and interesting to know the reader's imagination ;) thank you so much for reading (:

[Wild Rose]

Like it!


Stupid machine I've said what I want to say > is that 25 characters

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah sometimes I find that 25 character thing irritating too!
Thank you for liking this one, Wild Rose. :))

[Wild Rose]

Some times that is all I can think off to say

I have added tour book to my library

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's very kind of you, thanks again :)

[Peter]

That is too funny! If your talking about a good tug on the nose, Dont you think that to be a bit risky though? there is a good chance of contact with a lingering snot or worse a big wet bugger !!!!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

haha the closest I've come to fighting with men/guys has been arm wrestling (I usually always won lol) so yeah, the snot thingy is something to consider ;P
Thank you for the fun review and for reading, Peter. Appreciated. :)

[Vivian Gospel]

Should men be scared of you? Haha. Like the cartoon too.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah I'm told that I'm quite intimidating lool
Thank you! Glad you like it :))