Save Me A Spot In Your Heart

Save Me A Spot In Your Heart

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
"

Evening scribbles.

"


Save me a spot in your heart, 
for I will rest there 

and still find my way 
through each of your 
tiny gaps and tiny cracks.

Save me a spot in your heart,
and I will leak through

your very essence,
like you ebb and
flow through mine;

a constant reminder,
that I am no longer
just me...

Save me a spot in your heart;
my heart ~ is tire...


© 2019 Dr. YumnaKay


Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay

My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Very creative, Lady Yumna,
The way you've ended with your heart tired and fading away, blending into the soothing comfort of your lover's is sheer genius … you're tops!
As you know, I not only write in structured rhyming poetry, I've many Free Verse pieces posted, as-well, and I thoroughly enjoy a well-written version of this form … yours here is definitely an exemplary example.
Presentation, emotion, metaphor, spot-on syntax and line-breaks, choice of picture, font, and greyed hue set the perfect moment and nuance of romantically poignant passion and fervor that leads from lovers' attractions to their melding into one entity … beautiful!
Love the perfect accompanying music choice, too!

Love has captured You, and through your excellent poetry, Us … thank you! ⁓ Richard 🌼

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Years Ago

Your words here made me smile. Thank you so much for appreciating this one, Richard. Glad you like i.. read more



Reviews

Your words remind me of both the intimacy of a heart and the vastness of it... the spaces in us that are worlds of life and lives. The line that sings as a sacred echo, save me a spot in your heart, seems so full of longing, of desire to not fade into that oblivion that is our forgetting. Some things never leave us... and some things are simply too painful not to let go...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Years Ago

I agree..some things and some people just stay with us no matter what...
That line actually g.. read more
An owl on the moon

5 Years Ago

Yumna, have you seen the points you get for logging in, giving reviews, etc.? Well, years ago, you u.. read more
Very creative, Lady Yumna,
The way you've ended with your heart tired and fading away, blending into the soothing comfort of your lover's is sheer genius … you're tops!
As you know, I not only write in structured rhyming poetry, I've many Free Verse pieces posted, as-well, and I thoroughly enjoy a well-written version of this form … yours here is definitely an exemplary example.
Presentation, emotion, metaphor, spot-on syntax and line-breaks, choice of picture, font, and greyed hue set the perfect moment and nuance of romantically poignant passion and fervor that leads from lovers' attractions to their melding into one entity … beautiful!
Love the perfect accompanying music choice, too!

Love has captured You, and through your excellent poetry, Us … thank you! ⁓ Richard 🌼

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Years Ago

Your words here made me smile. Thank you so much for appreciating this one, Richard. Glad you like i.. read more
Wistful, touching, appealing, irresistible... You weave a magic charm.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your lovely words here, Jibey. Appreciated.

2
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

476 Views
13 Reviews
Rating
Added on December 26, 2018
Last Updated on January 1, 2019


Author

Dr. YumnaKay
Dr. YumnaKay

Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom



About
|Dentist| |Poet| |Writer| |Realist| |Enthusiast| |Eccentric| |Egocentric| |Anti-social| |INTJ| |Cancerian| more..

Writing
Seconds Seconds

A Poem by Dr. YumnaKay



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Tangled Webs Tangled Webs

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay


Heaven Heaven

A Poem by lightsong