Second Best

Ramblings. I think I was a little angry when I wrote this :x

Tired of being taken 

second best, 

she tweaked first 

just a little bit,

and came up with 

a mighty fist...!

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha sounds like a short chopping upper cut to me...delivered while on the inside ;) i love the fights ... but i think i would stay away from this one ..i especially like the intrigue as she tweaks first ... and i am left with the sense that there is a whole lot more to this story, Doc! i like it ... glad i didn't miss it
E.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh, I meant tweaking 'first' - the word ;) dk if it came across as that but your review made me smile. It was more a misunderstanding hahah but yeah, def something more ;)
Thank you so much for reading and appreciating, Einstein :))

[Einstein Noodle]

yeah ... i read "first" ... ;) your poem points out a grave dnager in all of social media land ...way too easy to misunderstand as well as be misunderstood ... read "Second Best" a couple more times and .. it reminds me of so many things taken wrong but inflamed to mighty proportions ... like responding to a troll rationally ... oh my...then we're in for it big time ;)))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and just when he thought he was going to win by decision!
packs a lethal punch..(pun certainly intended)
j.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ayee, right when they're thinking of winning, there comes the punch! :P lol thanks so much for reading and your words, Jacob. Always appreciated.

[Chris Shaw]

This has got attitude Dr Y. A bit of tweaking before an upper cut. Too right, what woman wants to be second best.. Top of the pops or nothing I say. You've got me smiling.

Chris

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Def not me, it's an awful feeling :/
Glad it made you smile, Christine. Thank you so much for reading and your words :)