Dormant

Dormant

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Midnight scribbles.

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I have burned the bridges 
and walked on tight ropes 
of meaningless hopes,

which bloom 
in graveyard of thoughts;

where wanderers roam, 
silent, with hollow laughs, 
while nursing ...dormant hearts.


© 2019 Dr. YumnaKay


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Dormant... the words speaks of winter... of life sleeping to the point of death... or as near to death as one can come. And yet your midnight scribbles are filled with so much life... even in the graveyard places of your mind. Yes.. yes... even in graveyards life finds a way. What an agonizing beauty you've created. 🖤🖤🖤

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Dr. YumnaKay

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Your words here lift my spirits so much, Craig. Thank you so much for appreciating x
An owl on the moon

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May you soon be found soaring, dear Yumna... and speaking to us of the sight of earth from above the.. read more



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This kinda describes the autumn of my life . . . so many things that I thought "defined life" are now going or gone dormant, but this is not a bad eventuality . . . ridding my life of dormant detritus, I've inadvertently made space for new ways of seeing & being (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts here and for reading, BG. Appreciated. :)
This Monday Scribble has the tone of exactly how I feel today. Heavy sigh.... Doc, you know how to put just the right patina on piece that makes the reader melt into the words. Great work...

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for your words here, Crowley. Though it makes me sad that you relate to the piece .. read more
These lines are crammed with dark imagery Dr Y. Those hollow laughs and dormant hearts so uncomfortable to live with. It seems that your midnight scribbles are both written and painted in black.

Chris

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Month Ago

Lately, they are... Thank you so much for reading and your words here, Christine. Hope you've been w.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

All good with me Dr Y. I wish the same for you :)
this is amazing!! i love the mystifyingly creatively dark imagery...this reminds me
of one of s. plath’s poems.

perhaps one in the midst of the heavy burden of anguish in having to let go of persons or situations

brilliant dictation, word-play.
~ xx



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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Month Ago

I love your review here and the extravagant praise, ms.barrie! I'm very much inspired by Plath's poe.. read more
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OMG I love this! When did you get so darkly gorgeous with your writing here Yumna? My style for sure!!!! Hope all is well.

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Month Ago

hah, you're sweet! Lol I suppose I get into random phases of writing like this ;P been alright, than.. read more
Dormant... the words speaks of winter... of life sleeping to the point of death... or as near to death as one can come. And yet your midnight scribbles are filled with so much life... even in the graveyard places of your mind. Yes.. yes... even in graveyards life finds a way. What an agonizing beauty you've created. 🖤🖤🖤

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Month Ago

Your words here lift my spirits so much, Craig. Thank you so much for appreciating x
An owl on the moon

1 Month Ago

May you soon be found soaring, dear Yumna... and speaking to us of the sight of earth from above the.. read more
the laughs certainly become hollow, as our hearts begin to give up hope of love...
and we can only hope for that special someone to come along and raise us from the figurative dead.

j.

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Month Ago

Thank you for reading and your words here, Jacob. Always appreciated.
This has a tinge of sadness as the protagonist contemplates the futility of trying to be hopeful in the eye of disaster and misguided ruminations as the focus of their attention does not reciprocate and leaves them unrequited.

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John Alexander McFadyen

1 Month Ago

You are back!
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Month Ago

Aye, just been pathetically dry in terms of writing lately :(
John Alexander McFadyen

1 Month Ago

When I feel like that I just relax and read and review and the ideas start to flow.

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